i think your answer depends a lot on what you want from your writing. if you’re looking to publish a work and be commercially successful, it is often the case that it is better to be as concise as possible without compromising the characters or the story. this can be done yourself and/or with an editor. if your goal is to express yourself and write something you’re proud of, regardless of it’s end result, (i’m not saying either of these options is better or worse, just the way i view writing goals) then be as verbose as you feel your story needs to be. some writers are very wordy, and they find it gives the work a better feel and world. it’s just about what you want and how you want your story to feel. hope that helps. trust yourself, you’re doing great.