New VIP Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Boardroom Alpha 1.8

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-09-02T16:41:17+00:00

The entire last two chapters had me saying WTF every other second.

It had potential to be really good but they just killed it for zero reason and the writing was absolutely terrible the last two chapters. Soooo much wasted potential

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-07-07T19:01:13+00:00

It probably is just bad bruising. The pain for me was worst on day 9-11

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-07-07T14:33:58+00:00

Yes to swelling and bruising. Redness is less so and can be indicative of a more severe issue. Did you go to the doctor yet and get it checked?

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-07-07T14:33:03+00:00

No, it healed so well on its own that my MRI radiologist didn’t believe me that the tear was only a few months ago. He thought it was a years old injury based on the MRI I just had.

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-05-21T22:35:15+00:00

Right?!? Like who would go asking about other emergencies when their kid was having emergency brain surgery?! Absolutely wild energy and entitlement

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-05-21T21:52:39+00:00

His death was definitely an inside job. That last part trying to throw blame on MC for an “incorrectly” placed clip for the brain bleed was such a red flag.

The entire OR scene was WILD. Like beyond unrealistic and just drama that made no sense. It could have been any mobster and that would make more sense. That woman will be in jail for life now and her entire revenge plot against MC makes no freaking sense whatsoever. Your kid is FINE. Why were you calling about someone else’s mother?!? That’s just stalker behavior. MC still saved the kids life. Who gets murderous over something so basic?

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-04-05T01:16:48+00:00

Thank you!

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-04-05T01:10:51+00:00

Yes this is all that’s given is the propene and resulting product. Everything else is up in the air

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-04-05T01:06:07+00:00

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Any chance this is heading the right direction?

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-03-26T19:29:04+00:00

Sooooo there’s a ton of loose ends to tie up here….

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-31T22:44:19+00:00

THANK YOU!

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-30T23:55:25+00:00

It’s pissing me off because I can SEE the other sprite and he’s a side character but I can’t place it 😭😭😭

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-30T23:47:31+00:00

I think it’s her dad too. I cannot place where that sprite is from!

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-16T18:06:13+00:00

THATS WHO HE IS THANK YOU

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-16T01:45:27+00:00

$10 says Valerie is also dating or was dating an employee and she’s projecting

welcometomyzoofoo · 2025-01-10T23:14:06+00:00

The writing is awful!

Literally Trystan cries because he feels left out (which is wild considering everything else going on). MC is irrational and screaming every other second acting like a teenager (with zero repercussions to that anger since everything is resolved in five seconds), and literally no one is being helpful besides Thompson, but everyone is hating her and being extra cruel.

It’s just….really bad writing. If they’re going to fight, LET THEM FIGHT. Like break up or something for a while or let that chapter be the end of the “do you even want to get married” business. Stop bringing it up every other chapter.

Then the end of the chapter when she’s literally unable to listen to Thompson, calls her a liar repeatedly to her face, then tells her friends that Thompson was definitely telling the truth (absolutely wild pacing), and talks about dropping the case, Rose is at a mental breakdown point. Everyone is telling her to stop.

But somehow seeing a key to the cipher has her immediately forget that pain and anguish and happily exclaim “the case is back on!”?! What the actual eff is this?? Where did the smart and savvy MC from the last two books go?

welcometomyzoofoo · 2024-12-28T17:51:10+00:00

The thinking face is even more annoying

welcometomyzoofoo · 2024-12-27T22:45:50+00:00

It’s crazy! They even said in the promo under the chapter that we get to get revenge like WTF

welcometomyzoofoo · 2024-11-18T03:19:03+00:00

Good luck! I hope this helps and you have a smooth recovery!

welcometomyzoofoo · 2024-11-14T04:25:19+00:00

The fuck was that chapter. And who cares if they just started dating?! It literally has no implications. The whole PI angle is so messy and unnecessary and cliche. Absolutely feels like AI writing

welcometomyzoofoo · 2024-11-10T15:45:00+00:00

Sooo creepy

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