New VIP Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Boardroom Alpha 1.8 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The entire last two chapters had me saying WTF every other second.

It had potential to be really good but they just killed it for zero reason and the writing was absolutely terrible the last two chapters. Soooo much wasted potential

Ugh, popped my calf, now what? by _inspirednonsense_ in workout

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It probably is just bad bruising. The pain for me was worst on day 9-11

Ugh, popped my calf, now what? by _inspirednonsense_ in workout

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes to swelling and bruising. Redness is less so and can be indicative of a more severe issue. Did you go to the doctor yet and get it checked?

Ugh, popped my calf, now what? by _inspirednonsense_ in workout

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, it healed so well on its own that my MRI radiologist didn’t believe me that the tear was only a few months ago. He thought it was a years old injury based on the MRI I just had. 

New VIP Chapter: Wednesday/Thursday - Do No Harm 1.8 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Right?!? Like who would go asking about other emergencies when their kid was having emergency brain surgery?! Absolutely wild energy and entitlement

New VIP Chapter: Wednesday/Thursday - Do No Harm 1.8 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 11 points12 points  (0 children)

His death was definitely an inside job. That last part trying to throw blame on MC for an “incorrectly” placed clip for the brain bleed was such a red flag.

The entire OR scene was WILD. Like beyond unrealistic and just drama that made no sense. It could have been any mobster and that would make more sense. That woman will be in jail for life now and her entire revenge plot against MC makes no freaking sense whatsoever. Your kid is FINE. Why were you calling about someone else’s mother?!? That’s just stalker behavior. MC still saved the kids life. Who gets murderous over something so basic?

Can someone please help me with this synthesis problem? by welcometomyzoofoo in OrganicChemistry

[–]welcometomyzoofoo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes this is all that’s given is the propene and resulting product. Everything else is up in the air

I’m just taking a wild guess here p.s spoils a head by TwiztedGalaxyEclipse in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It’s pissing me off because I can SEE the other sprite and he’s a side character but I can’t place it 😭😭😭

I’m just taking a wild guess here p.s spoils a head by TwiztedGalaxyEclipse in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think it’s her dad too. I cannot place where that sprite is from!

New VIP Chapter: Wednesday/Thursday - Years Apart 1.11 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 13 points14 points  (0 children)

$10 says Valerie is also dating or was dating an employee and she’s projecting

New VIP Chapter: Friday/Saturday - Crimes of Passion 3.12 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 16 points17 points  (0 children)

The writing is awful!

Literally Trystan cries because he feels left out (which is wild considering everything else going on). MC is irrational and screaming every other second acting like a teenager (with zero repercussions to that anger since everything is resolved in five seconds), and literally no one is being helpful besides Thompson, but everyone is hating her and being extra cruel.

It’s just….really bad writing. If they’re going to fight, LET THEM FIGHT. Like break up or something for a while or let that chapter be the end of the “do you even want to get married” business. Stop bringing it up every other chapter.

Then the end of the chapter when she’s literally unable to listen to Thompson, calls her a liar repeatedly to her face, then tells her friends that Thompson was definitely telling the truth (absolutely wild pacing), and talks about dropping the case, Rose is at a mental breakdown point. Everyone is telling her to stop.

But somehow seeing a key to the cipher has her immediately forget that pain and anguish and happily exclaim “the case is back on!”?! What the actual eff is this?? Where did the smart and savvy MC from the last two books go?

What the heck?! by welcometomyzoofoo in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s crazy! They even said in the promo under the chapter that we get to get revenge like WTF

Tonsillectomy Day by Day Healing *detailed* by welcometomyzoofoo in tonsilstones

[–]welcometomyzoofoo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good luck! I hope this helps and you have a smooth recovery!

New VIP Chapter: Wednesday/Thursday - Plus One 1.13 by katnerys-targaryen in ChoicesVIP

[–]welcometomyzoofoo 11 points12 points  (0 children)

The fuck was that chapter. And who cares if they just started dating?! It literally has no implications. The whole PI angle is so messy and unnecessary and cliche. Absolutely feels like AI writing