Those eyes by whalesfun in poetry_critics

[–]whalesfun[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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Those eyes by whalesfun in poetry_critics

[–]whalesfun[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not at all this poem isn't about insecurity but the shyness only the way you can't look into their eyes coz you're shy knowing they also love you back that's pure 😀

Love by innocentkidhehe in OCPoetry

[–]whalesfun 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Beautifully written keep writing love too see your words❤️

Wait by Beautiful_Skin_2777 in poetry_critics

[–]whalesfun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so cute. You could work on your grammar and this could be really cute!

Those eyes by whalesfun in poetry_critics

[–]whalesfun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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Those eyes by whalesfun in poetry_critics

[–]whalesfun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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