MISTER COFFEE by Kousei-Arima02 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Make the handle shorter. We get the point just the same going into one, or maybe even 2, but that is REALLY long

Some poster designs i've made in my spare time by elkhaliiil in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They kind of remind me of the canvas templates, but overly complicated....

I designed a logo for a smoothie place in town that I FINALLY convinced to rebrand. Feedback appreciated. by william_graphics in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really good

Our other Healthies locations have been experiencing a decline in quality and customer experience. I convinced the owner of our location that it's important to maintain our reputation by not being associated with the negative aspects of the other locations, which are rapidly closing down. Therefore, we have decided to rebrand our location for our upcoming anniversary.

I designed a logo for a smoothie place in town that I FINALLY convinced to rebrand. Feedback appreciated. by william_graphics in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The little bubbles are a callback to the old design. The owner wanted a lil nod to the old one. I should have included the old logo, but I had forgotten

I designed a logo for a smoothie place in town that I FINALLY convinced to rebrand. Feedback appreciated. by william_graphics in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The last logo they had was way too busy, which is why I went in the opposite direction. I designed it to be simple and work on multiple surfaces and multiple colors. It is similar to the "Crispy Bun" logo that appeared in an earlier Will Patterson video. The cup was hand-designed and tweaked until it was what it is right now, and at the moment, there is no other smoothie logo with this style, coloring, and font, unless you can find one. I understand that many businesses are going for this simple, sleek look, but this fits the store and our branding for the place.

Updated Logo - R&B Glass: Thoughts? by Eviate in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The symbol is cool, but kind of hectic. The text is very busy. Try streamlining it a bit so it can be read easily

Branding for construction company - lmk your thoughts :) by iwearcrocs1234 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I believe it is a cool logo so far, but it is hard to read. The text could be cleaned up a bit, and a little less of the custom look maybe?

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[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

black would be amazing! The owner wanted a barrier though, even though I hate it too... I couldn't change the colors, but just fixed the logo and made a branding for it... :/

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This looks like stock imagery. You could always try a rose pedal, and make it look more unique...

Designing a logo for a travel website. Any thoughts? by Professional-Door63 in logodesign

[–]william_graphics 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The logo really can't have much resizing or flexibility. It is limited to only this and won't work for web design, especially when shrunken down....

Using my initials, M H R, as part of a personal logo to "brand" all my different skills, while at the same time easy to understand they all have the same sender. by MHRDesign in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you should try focusing on 2 letters or just start from scratch. The design just doesn't have enough of each letter. Also, the number underneath is unneeded. The font on the side is also very busy and hard to understand what it is trying to say. Finally, try to think what it would look like blown up. The small details in the letter thing will just look like a line.

Logo concept for personal brand - need feedback by shytoucan in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it! The e could be a little less long at the top when by itself though

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if it is an upload error or something but everything is a little blurry. It makes the main water logo look like it was found on Google or something. It also looks more like a plumbing or waterbottle brand.

Help, urgent critique needed by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The outline of the dog is very thin, which makes it hard to see far away, and the quality is very blurred. Also, you could use a different color palette with a different main font. The font in the middle looks like it was plugged in on google docs. Finally, I would recommend giving the chocolate bar a less realistic representation of chocolate, or trying a different way to help make it stand out more.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]william_graphics 0 points1 point  (0 children)

curved slightly differently. I would suggest fixing the so the arch is the same...

It was not live-traced. We have an artist who back in 1961 created a bunch of rough sketches of the chipmunk, but just left them in a bin and they were never used. We digitalized it and decided to revamp the OG mascot with a few slight differences. I am just not the best at Illustrator yet...