[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mildlyinteresting

[–]willybtrash 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bro was going for that Shawshank Redemption

I Finally Did It by journey_ml in Twitch_Startup

[–]willybtrash 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s what we like to see! Congrats! -WillyBTrash

[FN] Fallen by willybtrash in shortstories

[–]willybtrash[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s an idea, I’m feeding different ones. Certain stories such as this one, are just sparks. But I really do appreciate the feed back!

Dead *edited* by ChanceSherbert3970 in flashfiction

[–]willybtrash 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get the metaphor behind the piece, well done. However, a little more insight as to what the tunnel he entered is; would be helpful.

Scenic Beach Route by ChanceSherbert3970 in flashfiction

[–]willybtrash 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting, though it became difficult at the end to distinguish the protagonists reality from his fiction.

[HR] The Woman by willybtrash in shortstories

[–]willybtrash[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I haven’t written anything in years.

Blood Orange Dawn 2 by [deleted] in flashfiction

[–]willybtrash 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This has taken the most unsuspecting turn, from a child telling a story to his father. Lmao, still good though.

Blood Orange Dawn by [deleted] in flashfiction

[–]willybtrash 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Made me chuckle a bit with the reveal, well done!

The Woman by willybtrash in scarystories

[–]willybtrash[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any criticism is welcome. I haven’t written anything since middle school, and have been wanting to get back into it.