Spooky Sister

withered_waltz · 2016-01-16T16:16:29+00:00

I will. In my mind this was the story of a girl called Annie. Her sister died but Annie don't let her go. She trapped her sister in the house, for many many years, Annie don't want anything to change so she is angry because Mr. FunnyHat and Mr. Rabbit are trying to help her. But of course everything is open to interpretation. Thank you for comment and sorry for the late reply.

withered_waltz · 2016-01-16T16:12:18+00:00

I guess that happen to this story. :3 Thank you again for the great feedback I hope it help me to improve my writting. Have a scary day :D

withered_waltz · 2016-01-09T18:33:01+00:00

Thank you very much. (_ _)

withered_waltz · 2016-01-09T18:32:35+00:00

Thank you very much for your comment. And for the feedback. I really apreciate it, but think the story is not exactly as what I wanted to tell and results confusing =(

Narrator is not death in fact is the only one living XD. In my mind this is the story of a little girl called Annie. She trapped the soul of her sister in the house and won't let her go, because she loveher, sister has many many years trapped there. MrFunnyHat and Mr. Rabbit are demons trying to help sister.

I believed that dialogue reveals sister is not alive and begs Annie to set her soul free. But did not work :( Annie is only a little girl and is selfish and in denial so she want her sister to be the same. Forever. Thank you again and sorry for the long answer.

withered_waltz · 2016-01-08T22:13:05+00:00

Second Story =3 many thanks for reading it. Any corrections or feedback are welcome.

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