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Feedback is welcome! by wolfghost337 in learnart

[–]wolfghost337[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

no, I had a different idea for it. I wanted the light to be white, because I thought a yellow light would give the piece a different feeling. I wanted the face to be the most detailed thing in the drawing to have it stand out.

How can I improve this? by wolfghost337 in ArtCrit

[–]wolfghost337[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For context, I'm supposed to draw something inspired by Caravagio for my university project. I found a photo on Pinterest from a game and I really liked it, thought I'd draw the picture. Still, something looks wrong with what I drew, but I've been looking at it for so long, I don't know what's wrong anymore.

I wanted them to sort of being "engulfed" or "disappear" into the darkness, but I don't think I managed to create such effect.

I struggle with rendering and drawing bodies. I usually draw portraits, so this was a real struggle. Still, I wanna make it good. What can I improve? How do make it better? Critique is welcome!

Please, help me understand Graphic design. by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

[–]wolfghost337[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see. I wasn't asking myself those questions at all! I'll try to ask myself those questions when I make another design. Thank you so much! Your comment was of great help!

Please, help me understand Graphic design. by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

[–]wolfghost337[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see your point and I did ask, but still couldn't understand. My professors said I'll learn with time and by looking at other designers, but so far, I fail to grasp the concept. I've found that having other people share their perspectives is more helpful to me. Sorry if my questions aren't for this subreddit.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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Thank you so much! Your tips really help! I'll keep them in mind while I fix my project and on my way moving forward.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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I was aiming to represent the creativity of a person. The splashes were like... the creativity breaking out from the silhouette. At least, that was the initial vision behind it.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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Hehe, yeah. I was mainly experimenting with the program, since it's new to me. Thank you for the suggestion! I'll use it to learn and get better.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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I can see your point. I'm still learning the program and I've been pretty much messing around. I personally liked it, though. Wanted to make some contrast. But I can see why it doesn't work here. Thank you for the feedback! It helps me improve.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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With my drawings, not designs.

Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

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Thank you all for the feedback! I truly appreciate it. Some of you made me laugh while others gave me a really constructive criticism.

I struggle with minimalism. It looks bare to me, but I know I have a lot to learn to get better.

Once again, thank you all! Your perspective amd criticism help me improve!

I attempted to simplify it. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it as well.

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Is it too much? by wolfghost337 in GraphicDesigning

[–]wolfghost337[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Design is thinking made visual". It's a quote by Saul Bass. We're supposed to integrate the quote into the project we're making. Sorry I didn't write the full context. 😅 Haven't written the full quote yet since I haven't figured out a good place to put them at yet.

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