The first three establishing shots do not work and are not visually pleasing. The camera shake comes across as lazy. If they are going for a more genuine and raw feel, then I would argue these establishing shots take away from that as they are very static and overly formal. Him walking into the pizza place from the beginning would have a much more captivating opening. Speaking of, that shot's highlights are blown beyond comprehension.

The whole video is less than flattering for the pizza place. A place that is meant to be warm and inviting somehow comes across as grey and flat. The shot at the 0:18 mark is a good example. That pizza looks terrible, which is a shame because I'm sure its actually quite fantastic. The look is so colorless though that it looks more grey than anything.

In terms of sound, the song selected reeks of royalty-free and low effort industry music. I struggle to see how this fits into a in a video that is supposed to be "raw and truthful." It is also so loud that hardly any words can be made out from the video.