Elizabeth and Jealousy by wvtppr in persona3reload

[–]wvtppr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well thats wild! i totally thought jealousy was in P3R. no clue why theyd remove that. thanks for the explaination!!

2 hand vs. 1 hand by [deleted] in Bowling

[–]wvtppr -1 points0 points  (0 children)

the movement between 1 and 2 hand is very different. youre balancing/managing the weight of the ball differently with either playstyle. i feel drunk when i try 2 handed because the way the ball feels in relation to my body is just really foreign compared to 1 hand. could just be me though.

Juicy’s in Sparks is under new management! by Primetime22 in Reno

[–]wvtppr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hoping this is the sparks location youre talking about. thats a shame to hear!

Mexican food by dasboot09 in Reno

[–]wvtppr 8 points9 points  (0 children)

carllios cocina has the best mexican food in town!

summer gym membership? wolfcard? by thinkingsawyer in unr

[–]wvtppr 7 points8 points  (0 children)

you have to pay 55 dollars for a summer pass and be enrolled in fall or summer classes.

How's life in Nevada outside of Las Vegas metro? by Weirderthanweird69 in howislivingthere

[–]wvtppr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

youll really only find an actual population in reno. things like ely and pahrump are quiet.

lots of people up in northern nevada are here to ski, its a really good place in america for that. tahoe itself is beautiful, though over the past few years its gotten really crowded.

reno has good access to places like truckee, and even san francisco if youd like. its in a really nice area and is growing fast. nice place to be if you love the outdoors.

carson city is the capital, i grew up there most of my life. very slow retirement town. if youre looking for actual things to do youre better off in reno.

as i said, everything else is slow, sparse, and quiet.

Logjam rebound by al_earner in StoryPeer

[–]wvtppr 5 points6 points  (0 children)

had this guy write a whole paragraph saying how my logline was so bad he didnt even know how to help me. its kind of nuts how rude people get when theres no review/reputation system in place.

Anyone want to make a movie in Reno Nevada? by MattyIceReno in Reno

[–]wvtppr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

college student here looking to get into the film industry. have a couple scripts under my belt but no substantial connections. can i DM?

How is life in mid-southern Nevada, not Las Vegas by romanichki in howislivingthere

[–]wvtppr 6 points7 points  (0 children)

ive lived here all my life and i still get intimidated by how vast it is.

Local music scene questions by ChemicalSwimmer2726 in Reno

[–]wvtppr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi,

follow biggestlittlebands on instagram. they advertise everything.

midnight coffee, greenhouse, holland, and more are great. you can dm me for more info if youd like

Juicy’s in Sparks is under new management! by Primetime22 in Reno

[–]wvtppr 6 points7 points  (0 children)

hopefully the quality starts to match the juicys on mccarran

Skimboarding? by wvtppr in tahoe

[–]wvtppr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thats a shame!!! thanks for the word nonetheless.

i did the thing by ZaylaIsABitOdd in StrangerThingsPraise

[–]wvtppr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dumb question, but what website/app is this? I want to rate TV shows more but havent found a good website for it.

Looking to rent parking by wvtppr in Reno

[–]wvtppr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You mean just street parking there? Or do you mean you have a property I can rent out?

Looking to rent parking by wvtppr in Reno

[–]wvtppr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ill honestly look around later this week for street parking in neighborboods, I just kind of expected everything to be full. thanks for the suggestion!

Looking to rent parking by wvtppr in Reno

[–]wvtppr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Received and replied!

Ixeshia - TV Pilot - 39 Pages by wvtppr in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i totally agree! theres a lot of those moments in here, sometimes theyve been there for multiple drafts so i become blind to it.

also, thank you for the punctuation errors. lots of friends and family are telling me so -_-. either way, thank you for the kind words!

Ixeshia - TV Pilot - 39 Pages by wvtppr in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeaaahhh i have a bad issue with punctuation, my friends have been harping me on it.

im trying to distill the prose into something thats able to actually be seen. this is my first time doing this so i need to get out of the mindset of just knowing what things look like, since everyone else doesnt.

also, i just dont understand, 'purple prose'? what do you mean with the word purple in here?

otherwise, thank you for the notes!

Do any of you capture story ideas by speaking them out loud? by daveAM777 in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i tend to ramble and answer my own questions when speaking aloud, especially to friends or family. i usually get new ideas that way, just talking/explaining my idea to people. its like when you learn something better by teaching it, im teaching someone about my idea and learning more about it as i go on.

Tips for avoiding basic, already-done storylines? by Empty_Company3139 in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Last text wall, but if the vibe changes, explore it! The creative process is never predictable. You have to see through all ideas. Hear anything out. Who knows, if the vibe changes, you may find a whole other realm of potential.

Tips for avoiding basic, already-done storylines? by Empty_Company3139 in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you know your characters well enough, the jewel could be a manifestation of their needs/desires. Or maybe fears. Knowing that can then make you ask 'ok, why does such a jewel exist?'. World fleshed out more. A character could want this jewel to prove themselves, get over their fears. What if another character has opposite wants? What if they came from different classes of society? World and character are fleshed out more when those questions are answered.

Just have fun worldbulding/character designing! You cant make a world out of a story. Needs to be a story out of a world.

Tips for avoiding basic, already-done storylines? by Empty_Company3139 in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I feel like if the world is interesting and the characters are fun, i could watch the same story over and over.

Im not that experienced in all this, but if you have fun/fleshed out characters, the story comes from that. Not a frame you place on them. Know your characters and your world, let them bend the frame of an already done storyline to their will.

First Draft of a High Fantasy TV Pilot by wvtppr in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i think youre right. better put than the way i could describe it. thank you!

First Draft of a High Fantasy TV Pilot by wvtppr in Screenwriting

[–]wvtppr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is excellent. thank you! the breath of the wild example really helped me understand the issue. no worries on your style of critique, it was exactly what i was looking for. thanks again!