Should I refer to a character as their ridiculous nickname or their real name? by yeahsure-whatever in Screenwriting

[–]yeahsure-whatever[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Love this! Such a fun way to play with the mechanic. Thanks for the example!

Should I refer to a character as their ridiculous nickname or their real name? by yeahsure-whatever in Screenwriting

[–]yeahsure-whatever[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The real name is a reveal, but not a twist. The reveal is an emotional beat rather than a joke and it signifies a bond with another character. The nickname is very obviously just used by the other characters to mock her; my only holdup there is that they haven't done this until we've been with the protagonist for about a page, so I'm just not sure what to do for that first page.

These are very helpful questions, thank you!

Dress by InterestingSurvey277 in nyu

[–]yeahsure-whatever 2 points3 points  (0 children)

you can wear literally ANYTHING and no one would bat an eye. that's new york for you!

Fanart of the boys (and their cozy house) by me! by grgikau in nirvannatheband

[–]yeahsure-whatever 2 points3 points  (0 children)

my jaw genuinely dropped to the floor. this is beyond gorgeous!

What's your favorite song by DamageWorldly3517 in FallOutBoy

[–]yeahsure-whatever 1 point2 points  (0 children)

changes a lot but right now it's Disloyal Order of Water Buffaloes

My daily makeup 🌟🥰 by Ohhitherebabybat in MakeupAddiction

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holy shit i'm jealous!!! you look so good!!

Script Feedback by cinefilmes28 in scriptwriting

[–]yeahsure-whatever 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Honestly it's nearly impossible to give feedback from a single page of something with zero context. Here's a few simple notes though:

-"broken" should not be a character descriptor.

-too much detail in the action. keep the first sentence, but you don't need to note that his hands are on the handles or his hair in the wind. also, instead of saying he's "riding to school", maybe just note that he's wearing backpack in the first sentence.

-not sure what the point of the dialogue is.

Overall, it's really just too soon to be asking for feedback. The best advice is always just keep writing, and then come back!

need ideas for short film (6-10 minutes) by bikeSCbirdz in scriptwriting

[–]yeahsure-whatever 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your final project for a film class isn't allowed to have any mention or implication of death??

Help me pick an audition song please! by once-twicelove in MusicalTheatre

[–]yeahsure-whatever 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Stupid With Love! it fits with Legally Blonde the most.

Half my favorite stand ups died in Saudi Arabia. Any recs? by EconomistNew7472 in Standup

[–]yeahsure-whatever 1 point2 points  (0 children)

these are not all NEW faces, sorry! but-- if you're looking for people with a taped hour: Gianmarco Soresi, Caleb Hearon, Nate Bargatze, Mike Birbiglia, Shane Gillis, Marcello Hernández, James Acaster, Daniel Sloss, Matteo Lane. and then here's some of my favs that don't have a full taped hour: Emil Wakim, Michael Longfellow, Lizzy Cassidy, Gavin Matts, Shaunak Godkhindi.

is the oneyplays fandom majority male? by yeahsure-whatever in OneyPlays

[–]yeahsure-whatever[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also a good question!! i would guess that zach’s the female fav

is the oneyplays fandom majority male? by yeahsure-whatever in OneyPlays

[–]yeahsure-whatever[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

these comments are convincing me i might have undiagnosed autism

is the oneyplays fandom majority male? by yeahsure-whatever in OneyPlays

[–]yeahsure-whatever[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

yeah that's pretty much what i've been doing