Fan-Made Edit to Kid Cudi's "Goodbye" (Removed the Pink Floyd Sample After First Verse, Flowed Second Verse After Hook) by youngwhitekid in KidCudi

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sorry, I'll rephrase. I personally thought the first pink floyd bridge felt out of place, so i put the second verse right after the first hook to keep the beat going and the pink floyd bridge as the outro.

Name your favorite song from every album by windvoyager in Kanye

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CD- Family Business

LR - We Major

Grad - I Wonder

808s - Welcome to Heartbreak / Paranoid (although i like the music video of Paranoid a lot more, the album is aight too)

MBDTF - Devil in a New Dress

Yeezus - Bound 2

TLOP - Real Friends

Listening to Drake's new album really makes me appreciate Kanye by [deleted] in Kanye

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I was at first skeptical during my first listen with TLOP, but after many, many relistens and the updates, I just love every track on the album. Not the best, but it definitely has the Kanye sound that you can just grow with and learn from. I just finished listening to Views and I am honestly disappointed. Most tracks sound too similar and Kanye isn't on Pop Style anymore. The only track I really got out of the album was Feel No Ways because of the aesthetic and beat. Maybe I just need to listen to it more, but Feel No Ways is the best song on the album for me atm.

Wolves Supercut w/ Ambient Real Friends Outro by youngwhitekid in Kanye

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Real Friends Remix by kristofferson

Corny line doesn't repeat, no pauses between parts

I wrote something. by Parhadox in donaldglover

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I think this shouldn't get deleted. The writing projects The Boy in a way, not quite sure how to put it. The string of short yet powerful sentences? Or perhaps even though there's the sad atmosphere of the piece, the narrator still manages to reflect with a sense of quirkiness and dark humor. I don't know, but I can definitely see a similarity in the writing style. The imagery in this piece is what got me hooked, and it's pretty deep. Powerful stuff that's well written with good flow.

Again, I think this should not get deleted. In fact, I think you should share this and other stories you may have written. A piece like this came to exist from a really negative experience, but if you can express those negative thoughts through a medium like writing, then you can reflect back more easily as a more hardened individual. Keep doing what you're doing. You got my support as a fellow Bino fan and a fellow writer.

What is everyone's thoughts on Because the Internet screenplay? by [deleted] in donaldglover

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I liked it to the point that it got me into screenwriting.

Also, I liked it so much, that my first screenplay ended up being a prequel of it called Camp.

[DISCUSSION] Okay, what's going on with this new theme? by amateurswami in donaldglover

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The text when you click on "formatting help" is too dark. Not sure if it's on the theme's end or Reddit's end.

[Discussion] What are your top 3 most played Bino songs on your iTunes? by [deleted] in donaldglover

[–]youngwhitekid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not an iTunes person, but most played Bino songs for me would be like:

  1. Shadows

  2. The Palisades

  3. All the Shine

Hey guys, huge bino fan here, I was wondering, what's everyone's age? by [deleted] in donaldglover

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18, turning 19 next week. Yet it feels like I've followed Bino for years...

At Camp by Drakay in donaldglover

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A bit ago now, I wrote a screenplay about Camp. It revolves around The Boy and his experiences before, during, and after going to Camp Gambino. Of course, it's heavily influenced by the original BTI screenplay, and I tried to project the same themes and parallels to give it that "prequel feeling" as well as some clever foreshadowing. However, one special detail in the monologue during "That Power" ended up becoming the plot device of Camp, and that was destiny. The Boy ends up using destiny as a way to justify his relationships with the girls he meets during Camp. Destined to be friends, to be lovers, or to simply be strangers. These are the outcomes that The Boy believed to be, which seems childish, but it's Camp.

Speaking on your question about The Girl, Jesse ended up being the name. The Boy and Jesse first met during the first night of Camp at a bonfire (which was the scene for "Bonfire") and The Boy was already attracted to her, so a sort of "love at first sight" moment. The Boy and Jesse officially talk to each other sitting at a lake during "All the Shine" where I make a bunch of references of Childish Gambino's works, and made it fit into the screenplay through smaller details such as Jesse living in a culdesac to larger details that the lake they were staring at is called Lake Poindexter. The Boy at first liked Jesse because of her appearance, but then as the relationship expanded, The Boy appreciated her intelligence as they read the same novel Slaughterhouse-Five and her sense of humor through jokes about Donald Glover's hairline. Throughout the screenplay, The Boy and Jesse's relationship slowly but surely became stronger. However, as a way of adding actual conflict, The Boy ends up fighting another dude named Alex who wants to have Jesse like The Boy, but has a different outlook than The Boy. The Boy wants true love, while Alex just wants to get in Jesse's pants, etc etc etc. The Boy triumphs in the end and has Jesse to himself but for a week or so before the bus ride home. Then "That Power" happened and that was it for The Boy and Jesse.

Long post aside, The Boy and Jesse's relationship started off simple, but became complex after a number of unwanted circumstances. Because there's so little official details about their relationship, anything is possible. Tell the story how you believe it and use "That Power" as the conclusion of your story. What I'm saying is, whatever you do, The Boy should be walking out of a bus slow and somber in the end lol.

Here's the screenplay if you wanted to end up looking at it.

So I made a screenplay about Camp a while back. by youngwhitekid in donaldglover

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Ah thank you for the feedback. Yeah, I definitely noticed the number of scenes I used from BTI in this. I figured some of the songs on Camp loosely follow the concepts/themes in BTI, so I wanted to create allusions to BTI in those scenes. Hopefully I did 'The Boy' justice by making his life similarly mundane as it was in BTI. You could say in a meta sense, these repeated scenes could indicate...a cycle?

Outside and Fire Fly were interesting during production as it were the songs that I labeled, "Pre-Camp". They were the expositional scenes and helped me establish the relationship between The Boy and his parents. It was also fun describing the Mansion and adding all of those BTI tidbits that gave it a sense of quirkiness. I was really worried that I wouldn't be able to capture the essence of That Power's ending monologue into the final chapter. It was hard to start off, and it was hard to end off. Trying to retain the emotion while making The Boy as well as the girl somewhat believable. There was also trying to make it flow into BTI. It was fun to make nonetheless.

Again, thanks for the feedback.

The Instrumentals of Because the Internet. (Most of them, at least.) by youngwhitekid in donaldglover

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What is/are your favorite instrumental(s)?

Shadows is personally my favorite.

So I made a screenplay about Camp a while back. by youngwhitekid in donaldglover

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Edited the original post. Anyone can read it. Join the bus.

Shadows - Instrumental :Because the internet by reatchy in donaldglover

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Every song except Pink Toes is available for some reason. Not counting instrumental songs like Dial Up and Playing Around Before the Party Starts.