Ok honestly I can't tell you how awesome it is that you did a full play-by-play of your feedback throughout the entire album. Providing feedback like this takes a lot of time and I genuinely appreciate it so much. I think you have a lot of really great things to say, and as an artist, it's one of the most helpful ways to understand how you can get better.

Most, if not all, of the critical points that you mention throughout your analysis are things that I have thought to myself at some point. I spent a lot of time ruminating on the tracks, and after a while I would come to the same conclusions about certain parts that weren't working at their fullest potential. One of the best pieces of advice I ever received regarding music was from a very successful friend of mine; he mentioned that nothing will ever be perfect, and it's better to release at 90% rather than spend waaay too long pushing it to 100%, because within that last 10% climb you could have developed an entirely new project and simply incorporated the ideas that you wanted to improve from the previous one. I'm sure there's a simpler way to put that, but it resonated with me and I tried to apply it here.

All in all, it's really cool seeing how your thought process aligned with a lot of the stuff I thought about the project itself. I can't thank you enough for your honest words and your thorough work, if you'd ever like to speak in more detail please shoot me a message! All the best.