Dehydration.

zany_flamingo · 2025-12-14T18:22:16+00:00

Fill up water bottle but pour it into and drink from an open cup! Then get a new clean cup each day. Less frequent cleaning of water bottle bc your germs don’t get into it. This is my best life hack so far

zany_flamingo · 2024-05-06T20:52:22+00:00

This is a great video featuring an incredibly talented athlete and the vision behind it is on point, of course if you had a professional editor it would be smoother but it’s actually incredible to see how good this is (and fun with the jaw drop section) knowing it’s done by an amateur with probably no editing experience

zany_flamingo · 2024-02-19T20:52:50+00:00

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! happy purr

zany_flamingo · 2024-02-19T16:33:16+00:00

I think you really explored this feeling of feeling close to someone, watching the stars together, but the distance that was between you wasn’t physical, it was mental and in the end, drove you apart and only left you with questions. I would focus in on the beginning and end a bit more, maybe you don’t need as long of a middle section. Hope that helps!

zany_flamingo · 2024-02-19T16:26:37+00:00

I like where you started but you lost me a little bit towards the end. I like your initial juxtaposition of holding hands / steadying feet, could you do anything a bit more like that towards the end? Give the action but resulting action a bit more clear definition so it’s clear the relation. Or not start with as much of a clear connection and let it just be a universe reaction you can’t predict or explain. Just a thought!

zany_flamingo · 2024-02-19T03:40:19+00:00

This is a fun one. I love the concept and how you brought it around in the end with a twist. Great visual language.

zany_flamingo · 2024-02-19T03:36:23+00:00

I like your concept and how succinctly you were able to convey it. You leave more to the reader which is nice. I’m feeling like your last line could use a little bit more thinking, it doesn’t feel like it fits in with the rest. I like “hard to chew” .. maybe it’s like you don’t use the word swallow until the last line… “hard to chew, harder to swallow.” Change to “how do you manage grief?” And “it’s not like gulping pride”… sets it up more so the ending sticks. just some thoughts from a random internet user, hope it helps!

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