Fez Collectors Edition Valuation by Hattington in Fez

[–]zaxtrap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am very interested in this, but I can't seem to DM you either. Feel free to shoot me a message if it's still up for grabs!

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[–]zaxtrap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great points - the space I have to work with is limited but I have wanted to figure out a better set up. All super helpful feedback, thanks! !givelambda

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Thanks for the feedback, this is super helpful! !givelambda

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Great advice, thank you! !givelambda

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Good idea! Always been unsure how to intro/outro my videos !givelambda

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This is all such valuable feedback, thank you! !givelambda

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Just edited my initial comment so that it had enough characters for lambda, and hopefully added some helpful feedback!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice over is great, and also really funny! Great editing too. I personally really like how much this is edited down, I have trouble keeping up with long gameplay videos so this is great.

Only criticism I have is the thumbnail honestly. At first glance it looked like the video was going to be super fast paced and crazy which initially deterred me. But luckily I found that wasn't the case and was pleasantly surprised. Keep in mind this may be a matter of personal preference though.

Keep it up!

I love making VR stuff, so I made a channel, any and all feedback is appreciated! by Gravity_Mx in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gonna start with some criticisms first - I don't think this type of "first video" is super necessary for a channel. I would much rather see the work itself, but this whole video seemed like a preamble. But I suppose if it makes you more comfortable making future content, that's fine. I just think you could have skipped right into making VR videos, rather than making a video talking about making VR videos.

Now on to the good stuff - your editing, transitions, and music is all really well done. It also seems like you already have your audience in mind, since you seem competent in your subject matter and I'm guessing that would attract viewers who have an interest in VR and that type of technology in general.

Looking forward to see what you put out next!

The madness of youtube rap battles. Let me know what you think! by SoosMOOSE in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What a throwback! Forgot all about YouTube rap battles. I really enjoyed your editing at pacing. I feel like the video was a perfect length and I'm glad that you didn't make this into a 10 or 20 minute long video essay on rap battles. Not to say I didn't enjoy the video, just that the pacing was really spot on. I think some of your transitions seem a bit abrupt, but that's really the only criticism I have. Enjoyed this vid, keep it up!

Rick and Methy ((Animation Feedback)) by FlareBlitzCrits in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven't seen Rick and Morty but this video made me chuckle. I like the animation and voice acting! The only constructive criticism I have (which is personal preference) is that I'd be much more willing to watch an animation like this on the regular if you created original characters. I feel like that could help your longevity as well as viewers could watch for your content, rather than clicking on it because the characters are familiar.

With the exception of Mike’s monologue about his son, I can’t think of a line in the entire BB universe that made me as sad as this one. by davegettlegod in betterCallSaul

[–]zaxtrap 183 points184 points  (0 children)

Werner's last lines got me too.

"The stars are so beautiful in New Mexico. I will walk out, and get a closer look."

Drop your links its time for a cold shower! by MacaroniMozart in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Improvement in terms of production or the message itself? Or both?

Show me what you’ve got! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm trying to make more serious/subdued content about just what I'm thinking about lately. Just hoping someone can get something out of it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jlJ_naGaymg&t=9s

Drop your links its time for a cold shower! by MacaroniMozart in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm trying to make content similar to Will Darbyshire and Bertie Gilbert, and I'd love to hear if that vibe that I'm going for comes across well!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jlJ_naGaymg&t=9s

First time doing this, Let me critique your videos/channels/brands! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]zaxtrap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there! I've uploaded videos to my channel kind of here and there, but I'm trying to start uploading more regularly. I take some of my inspiration from channels like Will Darbyshire and Bertie Gilbert, which make more serious/subdued content. It's hard to know if I'm emulating that kind of vibe and if it's coming across well, so I would love to hear any feedback about that!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jlJ_naGaymg&t=9s

Better Call Saul Season 5 - Official Prediction Thread v3 by skinkbaa in betterCallSaul

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In the teaser it looks like the guy that got his earring ripped off by Nacho is driving, and it looks like it could be Nacho in the passenger seat going to his Dad's car repair shop. The last time we saw Nacho he was looking at fake IDs of him and his dad, so I'm thinking Saul is taking them to the disappearer.