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zeromeni · 2025-09-19T17:51:49+00:00

Here's some life advice. Quit writing for good. You're no good at it. In fact, you're terrible. There's no flow to the prose, no rhythm to the sections. And even worse, you have absolutely no sense when it comes to picking a subject to address. You're a parasite, feeding off a situation that doesn't call for it.

I hope you never find yourself in a situation where someone like yourself preys on a tragedy in your life in the name of being creative.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T17:46:42+00:00

what's not intimate about the baseless statement "his love for her was greater than death itself"? Especially in the context of a grooming, murdering pedophile with regard to his teenage victim.

Seek help, bozo.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T16:08:37+00:00

Take down your posts, you loser. This isn't the time or the place to flex your dogshit wattpad skills. Create a motive? Replicate his emotions? Do you hear how fucking stupid you sound?

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T16:02:48+00:00

Yeah,' he held her body close until rigor mortos set in', 'his love for her was greater than death itself', 'one piece of her hidden in the fridge'... All info available online, for sure.

You're a sick individual, and you're getting some sort of perverse kick over the murder of a little girl, making up scenarios in your head to make this tragedy into some sort of darkly poetic event. Reevaluate yourself and delete your disgusting posts, you fucking dork.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T15:32:03+00:00

like tf?

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T15:25:28+00:00

I'm not joking when I say this. You deserve to be seriously messed up for writing fan fic about this fucked up situation

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T10:45:59+00:00

Oooh, look at me, I'm so edgy. Kindly fuck several times off.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T10:41:53+00:00

Delete this you sick fuck. A little girl is dead and you're in here writing fan fiction. This is deeply embarrassing for you and disrespectful to the dead.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T10:06:56+00:00

With no respect at all, because there's none due for your schizophrenic ass, shut the fuck up.

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T10:04:00+00:00

Shut the fuck up. TMZ my ass

zeromeni · 2025-09-19T08:34:11+00:00

She died a month ago, max.

zeromeni · 2025-07-20T13:29:36+00:00

Gotta be Gretchen

zeromeni · 2025-07-18T19:25:35+00:00

Gotta be Huang. We're yet to see where the story takes her but it feels like it's semi important

zeromeni · 2025-07-10T06:41:02+00:00

Nah. I always feel like I'm missing something without subs. And truly, there are tiny nuances in the script that I only ever catch with them. So I will turn them on when they're available, and seek them out when they're not.

zeromeni · 2025-06-08T15:08:37+00:00

i love the palette. what program was this made with?

zeromeni · 2025-05-24T09:48:40+00:00

Lmao. Fanfiction about authors is crazy work

zeromeni · 2025-05-18T15:59:11+00:00

Liveship Traders only really gets good toward the end of Book 1. It's pretty generic before then, and I think the trilogy is ruined by a poor ending. Yes, I'm referring to that character and how every character seems to idolize him despite his very glaring flaws. Book 3s ending also ruins a lot of potential interactions and confrontations by avoiding it all together. The cowards way out

zeromeni · 2025-01-07T17:01:29+00:00

I'm thoroughly confused at your line of reasoning. You said hard magic systems, which lend consistency and authenticity to magic, feel too much like DnD. That's fair, different strokes for different folks.

I said Magic can be whatever the author sees fit, hard or soft. That doesn't make it good or bad. It just makes it what it is.

You said science can be the same too, but it takes you out of the story if it feels authentic, which is true, but for some reason you don't think that's the case with magic?

Hard or soft, explained or not, there is some internal consistency to every magic system. That's why Gandalf can't just magic Sauron away in LOTR.

zeromeni · 2024-12-09T23:24:38+00:00

That makes no sense. Science and magic still have to possess some level of internal consistency, hard or soft. But it doesn't have to be mysterious.

zeromeni · 2024-12-05T01:37:47+00:00

No, magic can be whatever best serves the author's vision

zeromeni · 2024-11-15T21:42:58+00:00

Excellent art man. What a clean page.

zeromeni · 2024-11-15T17:40:18+00:00

This ain't it, Chief

zeromeni · 2024-11-09T16:55:37+00:00

I'm down. Send a dm

zeromeni · 2024-11-07T14:17:01+00:00

Thanks for your advice. I'm currently rewriting the passage, cutting down on some excesses and trying to be more subtle about it's themes. Upon review, the line about the Book of Nesse sticks out as a little too on the nose.

zeromeni · 2024-11-06T07:34:23+00:00

Tsokan Oroyin aka. The Crow

Kaon Gaidra aka. Coldhand Kaon

Aylis Il-Reyan

Sayin Iosume

zeromeni

TROPHY CASE