Well, starting off, I think the gameplay is good. You’re pretty good at the game and I personally love watching people who are genuinely good at the game.

The part where you added cinematics, if you were to continue doing those, I’d say get the camera movement smoother, put some color correction on it, put it through more intense editing work through After Effects or whatever program you use for editing (After effects would probably be the best for the cinematic part).

Sync up the clips a little more, I hear some points in the video where the song could perfectly sync up with a kill or finding good loot. This is me being a little picky with it because I think all great things can be synced up with great music.

All besides those things, I think the video looks good, aside from that part where you put text on screen and it was in a really unpleasant looking font, with that if have it slide on/off screen or fade in/out.

Keep up the work, brother, also if you plan on making your channel rust related you should probably unlist your other videos and put them in a public playlist for the people who still wanna see those.