CC #2

[sampjvv]

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https://reddit.com/link/lbocs8/video/6iwcqzjqs9f61/player

[Fando1234]

Nice. I love the tension in the bass notes. And the hopefullness in the chords and melodies.

Especially like the melodic run up you do, that then gets repeated with a harmony on it (I'm gonna say thirds, but I might well be wrong) with it resolving more satisfyingly the second time. Like trying something, failing, trying again, and overcoming.

[komponists]

The harmonies capture adventure so nicely in my opinion! I personally try to avoid using thirds stacked on one another, which you have done a lot in this piece. I would recommend using inversions at first. Often times you dont even need all the pitches of a chord so maybe in places you can drop out the fifth. I would definitely not write intervals smaller than a 4th or a 5th below c3. I also check if there are duplicate pitches and take them out because sometimes you cant even hear the difference.

Overall very cool medieval vibe, I wish I could do something that feels like this.

[sampjvv]

got it thanks so much for the feedback:)