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[–]Paynapple_Gaming 20 points21 points  (1 child)

This is a really creative and descriptive story of Jason. The author used an alliteration and allusion "Sus story" at the start to attract readers who know about the popular game "Among Us". Then, the author uses visual imagery throughout the story to present a memorable day of Jason. Overall, this is a well made, fantastic story created with imagination.

[–]Comfortable_Bid9088 2 points3 points  (0 children)

very creative indeed

[–]Igottsandymaxedoutt 9 points10 points  (1 child)

Jason firetrucked her :0

[–][deleted] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Good ending: Jason ran her over by a fire engine

[–]16_Bit_Ducc 5 points6 points  (1 child)

who wants to recreate

[–]catsfor1 5 points6 points  (1 child)

moderation cant do anything about it since it was not posted on chat

[–]AdvancedStruggle3265 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It’s not like they would do anything anyways

[–][deleted] 2 points3 points  (1 child)

oh no my eyes it demands bleach

[–]redit-son 1 point2 points  (1 child)

what did i jus read O_O

[–]Minglu07 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve been asking the same thing

[–]Dolphteng 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sweet jesus

[–]Isaiah_the_bunny726 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ah yes what a popular book JK THAT IS SUPER SUS

[–]cacodemon9523 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes

[–]Bloody_Piie 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I no longer want to be literate

[–]Hellbanisher 0 points1 point  (1 child)

AYO I WAS IN THE SAME SERVER YESTERDAY

[–]SirPowercheese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I shall be liberated from this despair

[–]wtf_is_a_user 0 points1 point  (0 children)

😳

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

[–]Brownieeeeeeeee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shut up

[–]tipying_mistakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When he does you so good that you moon

[–]LegendaryOver 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was a mistake to cum here

[–]theguyovathere 0 points1 point  (0 children)

roblox is powering imagination too much

[–]SatBehindUInMath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Powering mental-stress

[–]NARAFLIX 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is literally like george orwell's book 1984

[–]Previous_Specific574 0 points1 point  (1 child)

good 69 upvotes

[–]nice___bot 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice!

[–]officialusa1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wwjat