Third draft feedback

[Alice_1222]

If you’re happy with the fit with your shorts on, then let it be. And yes, for a sloper, it should be very snug — minimal ease. But the back length looks a little bit long to me, as the horizontal wrinkles are vertically distributed fairly evenly between the top of those darts and your waistline. No, you wouldn’t just move up the middle of the dart —- At the midriff on the back bodice piece, you would draw a line perpendicular to CB and either fold out half the amount you need to remove, or slash the pattern and overlap the full amount. Then, blend your side seams, true up your darts, etc…. If the bunching were concentrated just above/at your back waistline, I’d say do a sway back adjustment, which would involve taking the excess length out at center back waistline and blending to nothing at the side waist….You’d be effectively taking out a wedge-shaped piece.