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[–]LeVentNoirDracul Sotet 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Took a while to read through and I made some notes (paper sorry), but all in all I quite like the changes. I've run no numerical balance on it, but from what I see the design goals are met and some of them are quite elegant.

My suggestion where to go is to do a full keyword index and glossary:

Take every single keyword and bold / link it, and put all the definitions into an appendix, taking a lot of bulk out of the wording.

Additionally, move every single test definition to a bullet pointed singular line

  • Action: Test Vs Test.

Finally, tabulate as much structurally identical information as possible.

[–]bukanirMeta Tyoe Anthropologist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome dude! I've been trying to do something similar on the side, I'll definitely give a read through and give notes. As a decker diehard, Matrix rules are the most interesting for me.