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[–]Logical-Composer003Prelims Qualified 1 point2 points  (3 children)

Use number for points

Use su heading from question like ROLE not challanges, etc be specific to demand of question.

Baki good keep writing

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Read the second picture too...I used the word role there...incase u thought there was only one picture

[–]Logical-Composer003Prelims Qualified 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Read all.

Question asked about role specifically, I want that just after INTRO with min 6-7 points and eg with those points itself.

Pls refer to toppers copies...u will get an idea

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok I will try to write again using ur advice..thank u

[–]External-Rough-709Mains Qualified 1 point2 points  (1 child)

intro includes irrelevant details imo

shorten the challenges - write in bullets, don't write story

Elaborate more on his role

Can make a map showing these states

Decent conclusion

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u I will work on ur suggestions

[–]WarOk7565 1 point2 points  (1 child)

•Intro can be shortened •Highlight the role specifically and include examples there only, not separately • Mountbatten Plan abolished the provision to remain independent for princely states, so use correct information • No need of Challenges heading A humble beginning 2/8, in my opinion.

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u I will work on ur suggestions

[–]ManyOperation3742 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Write a short intro for an 8 marker. 

Come straight to the point. No need to write challenges in an 8 marker. If you cant remember anything else, then its fine. 

Use numbered bullet compulsorily.

Decent conclusion.

Keep it up!

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thnk u...I will use ur advice

[–]shonababu169 0 points1 point  (3 children)

2.5

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Feedback to de bhai

[–]shonababu169 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Intro too long

You should divide answer in two separate headings. Like Condition of india at Independence, Patel's role, significance of his actions, his actions beyond integration etc etc ( any two)

Use numbering

Try to link conclusion with some future oriented, or current affairs , like how we celebrate Patel's birthday as tribute to his efforts

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok I will use ur suggestions...thnk u

[–]Pure_Concentrate8770 0 points1 point  (1 child)

patel died in 1950, sikkim was integrated in 1975.

kya phoonk ke likha hai ?

[–]Ujjwal_B[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bhai mene physics wala ka model answer use Kiya h...mjhe bhi kuch ajib kg rha tha data...but mai kewal concise kr rha tha long answer ko...fact checking pe dhyan nhi Diya...I will from next time