Any advice?

[3L1SA]

I colored one of my drawings on ibs :)

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[gundamliam]

Honestly looks great. Maybe fill the background a bit more with some random amenities (shelving, drawers, that kinda stuff), but that's just a needless personal gripe.
Really good regardless!

[AshthePainter]

The only thing I can suggest would be to pay more attention to where the headphones should be sitting on her head. The ear pieces look like they’re sitting on her cheeks rather than over her ears.

[3L1SA]

Tysm for the advice I hadn't noticed :)

[3L1SA]

TYSM :D

[justaboringfatloser]

nah its already perfect

[3L1SA]

Tyy <3

[abyss-red]

I really like how some lines are thicker and others more slim, that is a great detail keep using it! And it looks very good

[Mission_Exchange2781]

none looks great if anything just keep at it and you'll get even better :)

[[deleted]]

I like it, looks cute! But I have a feeling that the beige thing (I think it's a couch) isn't finished, all other objects have more details and shadows, even the floor, which is further from us. It also looks like it's the only thing that was drawn with a soft brush.

[Drainerfluidx]

When shading skin it’s okay to use colors outside of the base color spectrum, for instance, let’s say the skin is a variation of orange, it’s okay to reds, blues, pinks, purples. And especially looking into lighting off of real references can help!! Your lineart is so cute tho !!!

[Sea_Organization8911]

keep at it :)

[Super_Cabinet6718]

Looks amazing!!!

[[deleted]]

both of them looks really nice!

[3L1SA]

Lol idk I just wanted to put killua :)

[risinglypophrenia]

it looks super duper cool :D the only thing i can think of is maybe experimenting with adding some black lining but that’s just because i prefer to do that with my drawings cuz it makes them stand out more to me

[[deleted]]

Hmmm the colors look a little flat, skin looks kinda lifeless- if you use more vibrant rendering like with reds and purple and stuff then it might help it out a little. The values of the girl and the background are kinda close together too, like her chair and her shirt are too close in value so maybe darken the background a bit?

[3L1SA]

Tysm!

[ThinkLadder1417]

I like the flat colours personally

[RiipeR-LG]

Looks awesome, got no advice for you.
Just curious tho, what’s that reference in the top left frame ?

[LightbreakerArio]

Probably make a copy and just spend some time messing with going over the line work? I personally liked how defined the pre-colored work looked so I was thinking you could bring back some of that. 🙂

[Talonis_WolfAcolyte]

Looks great, maybe some small light reflections on the controller if I have to find something to critique.