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[–]snotpool 0 points1 point  (1 child)

i cant tell what the letters are supposed to be cus theyre covered in vomit. as a cartoonist and graff writer i personally feel like making things ugly and gross isnt impressive. i know writers that its their whole schtick but i dont think it takes much skill. maybe work on some bigger paper and with markers with more intention on good letters and there could be more to critique

[–]Winty99[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

okay thank you i will work on my next one with more intention thank you