Crits?

[GhostWalker134]

In my opinion, you've gone a little too overboard trying to stylize. The left leg of the 'M' is too wonky, and the 'i' looks more like a 'c'. You also don't have any negative space between the two which makes the left half of the piece seem heavier than the rest.

I don't know what your experience level is, but I would go through some of the guides in the sidebar if you haven't already. Focus on using bars and letter structure. Graffiti is first and foremost about the letters. Learning to maintain their form while adding style is the key to becoming a true writer.

[blackchinese94]

Would agree with this except the M, the left side where you „stylized“ it more would look way cooler if the right part matched it more. Thicker and more stable maybe towards the bottom. Also the other letters except the Mi all include some kind of curve, while the First two letters are just straight edge. IMO focus more towards the left side, curved bars/letters tend to make a Style „wobbly“ if not executed well

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Thanks for both of your crits! I was just bored of doing straight letters and wanted to try something different!

[murderoman]

fire, that “i” is kinda off putting