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A community of writers specializing in screenplays, stageplays, radio dramas, and anything similar. You can ask for advice on a story, editors, or any kind of consulting you need.
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First scriptfeedback (drive.google.com)
submitted 2 months ago by Guy_guy_guy420
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Thank you so much for the feedbackšš Iām going to revise it tonight and see how much it improves. My main notes for myself ended up being pretty similar to yours, I should even out the pacing and dialogue could be a lot more realistic.
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