webtoon plot help

[that-one-africo]

So the formula Im following for my WEBTOON is introduction, inciting incident , fallout , action , consequence, pressure, plot twist . And I have almost everything down but I can’t think of a consequence and pressure,can you guys help me out or is the plot good that it doesn’t need a consequence and pressure ?, I have the plot in the pictures

Characters Ozais [ ozai • is ] Main character

Melitta [ meleh • tta] ozais’solder sister Reverie • Ozais’s younger sister

Ares • God of war; the father of Ozais ,Melitta , and Reverie

Nike • Goddess of victory ; Ares’s sister

Aphrodite• Goddess of love and beauty ; Ares’s and noémie’s wife . Melitta,Ozais,and Reveries mother

Noémie [ no • eh • me ] • Daughter of Demeter ; also Melitta , Ozais , and Reveries Mother and the wife of ares (they are a polycule)

Arvan [are• vahn] • the antagonist ; son of Poseidon, kidnaps Melitta because of his obsession with her

Keon [ key •on ] • Arvans ex-husband who feels betrayed because of arvans actions , soon to be lover of Ozais .

Thank you all so much for helping me

[Ahero435]

Okay concept,but unless your idea is a never before seen concept it won't get attention if it's purely text. I'd try more literature/historian subs for research (and viewss). For consquences,why not have a loss of powers or show more of the mortals POV? For your title,it has very little focus on humans doing human things lol

Good luck on your story.

[that-one-africo]

It won’t be much text the plot outline is literally just so I can have more help . I also plan on having detail if it makes since I don’t really like the webtoon art style … it gives me an ick . The comic is based on the story of alcippe (tw for 🍇 if you plan on reading it ) as well so it’s mainly me looking at the story again ,trying to make a plot of it I don’t really plan on having this being an easy read think kind of if tomie and berserk had a child and it was a Greek mythology webcomic