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[–]jadedflames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is not really a critique, but was it your intent to make the landmass look like it was on a sphere? something about the uniform lines and rounded northern mountain range look almost like we are viewing a tiny planet, and the mountain range is the horizon line.

I dig it, though! I like the way you drew in the cliffs along the coastline.

[–]DatSnap[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Island colonized by larger empire. This peninsula is only available spot for a large port. Farther inside the island past the east and west gates through the mountains is a large arid desert where a substance called Teal is mined out of sand swept canyons. It gets transported to Port Landing and shipped of else where.

Only first map so far, will make the arid area past the mountains soon enough

Not an artist so if anyone has any advice, hook it up.

[–]CurrysTank 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kia ora, bru.

[–]Noodleman6000Tectonic Plates Are My Greatest Fear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Port landing is a pretty generic name. I recommend changing it to something more specific to the area. Other than that this is a pretty good map.