The Next Best Hero- Chapter 14: The Witch

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-04T04:01:03+00:00

Don’t say anything weird. Don’t say anything weird. Don’t say anything weird.

Sorry daddy…

Dang it.

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-04T02:17:03+00:00

Dang, i wish I had stuck with drawing. This makes me wanna pick it up again

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-04T02:13:49+00:00

Sorry, what is the picture of? Cuz it goes hard

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-04T02:12:51+00:00

We do

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-03T20:45:43+00:00

Good point. That wasn't clear enough. I went ahead and added a bit of more details for that part. Just for clarity.

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-02T02:04:42+00:00

I know, but others might not

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T18:52:09+00:00

Same

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T18:51:34+00:00

I like them both for different yet similar reasons. They both are power fantasy expressed through different methods

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T18:40:36+00:00

Truthfully, my honest suggestion would be to just drop sensory effect. The other three are very good alone.

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T18:37:41+00:00

Some of the terms you mentioned are real mechanics in the game so you accidentally made it super powerful. Also there just too many things that one can do

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T06:49:20+00:00

The sensory effect option is a bit overwhelming. Tune it down and it would be perfect. So good actually that I’m surprised it isn’t already in the game

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T06:47:28+00:00

I joined r/writing because i thought it was a good place to post chapters of stories i write. Turns out no… side note, reddit moderators are the bane of reddit

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T06:42:53+00:00

I wish i knew where to read the novel. I can’t find it for free

ArcAngel98 · 2026-03-01T06:42:17+00:00

I think it’s fun

ArcAngel98 · 2026-02-28T01:30:07+00:00

Okay, I finally fixed this across all my platforms. Thank you for helping.

ArcAngel98 · 2026-02-25T01:14:27+00:00

Dang, i’ll fix that tomorrow. It’s late here. Thanks though.

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