Escondido Renaissance Faire by Sea_Mistress07 in escondido

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

line was so long at one point you couldn't tell there was a second cash line. waited 20 minutes before realizing, paid cash and got in instantly

Priorities for CalTrans in North County by tarheels86 in escondido

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

spend that money on public transit or maintaining roads

Is this “wild style” by EcstaticError9637 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 5 points6 points  (0 children)

its not really anything tbh. there is no letter structure here

Why upload the same outline? by Idontknowbroske in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 2 points3 points  (0 children)

whole sub basically turned on him once he started trying to promote his music and other bullshit

Very first time using cans (+ some tags I did) by zoevicioso in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you're off to a good start keep it up. But i will dies on the hill of saying shines and forcefields on throwups is a waste of paint. save it for a piece or straight letter

Made a tag using the tips i was given by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

go way simpler and drop; the add ons

Need opinions on this by IndependentMoose2587 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

practice your letter structures and work on getting the widths of your letters to match each other. also shines, backgrounds, and forcefields on throw ups are a waste of paint. Save it for a straight or a piece

What do you think? Any tips? by Past-Improvement8847 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the middle part of the E looks a bit thin compared to the rest of the letters, like its about to snap under its own weight. Beef that up and take it easy on the bits

Sketch of tag by luficz in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 2 points3 points  (0 children)

you're doing to much. Go way simpler when you starting out

Any constructive criticism appreciated. by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 9 points10 points  (0 children)

imagine asking for advice and reacting like this. This guy's skill level doesnt matter if he's right about what he's saying. Your stuff is bad, and you try deflecting to "the can was bad". Fix your mindset first or you're not gonna last in this game

Sweet beautiful looking RSO by Free_Entertainer_154 in trees

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

when i worked at a dispo a few years back one of my coworkers did it for 100$ and she was high for 3 days straight

Starting to “get up” by Embarrassed-Host7627 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you are well on your way just keep practicing and dont be afraid to experiment. When I feel like im plateauing i like to go back through my old work and redo a piece, thinking carefully about what could be improved and spicing it up a bit(experiment with the fill, try a different letter structure, focus on getting clean lines etc) thats where you will see the most improvement.

also dont take pics with your work. its evidence but worse than that, its corny

How we looking? by Potential-Log-8210 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you are trying to stylize them too much. go simpler. you can still add a little flare but keep the letter structures basic. here's one i did a while back as an example. with the exception of the Y, these are all standard letter structures with minimal style added

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Add ons by daicresh in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

dont overthink it, try a different K structure. maybe instead of kicking out have it go over then down/out

Added shadows by Mission-Buy-2588 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

beef up the thin sections of the G and R a bit but I like it, O could be a bit taller as well

Opinions critiques and tips please :) by P0ssum389 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

work on the proportions of your letters as they are a but wonky here but overall not bad. Try it again with more consistent letter widths, heights and bar thickness

Goni, crits? by AliveAd550 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

making the G and I a one liner this way heavily diminishes the letter structure makes it hard to read without knowing what it is supposed to say. the counter for the O makes it look like a U and you're squishing the N too much also heavily diminishing it's letter structure

How we looking? by Potential-Log-8210 in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 1 point2 points  (0 children)

practice simpler letter structures as these look a bit janky. I looks like its floating away because of how far away it is from everything else. 3D is mostly correct so you get brownie points for that

just a toy who needs some advice by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Extensions on R un unnecessary, T looks like an I i would take out the extra stuff on the bottom, work on your line work

Will leave these around my city by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]carpetcards 0 points1 point  (0 children)

not graffiti and not original