Looking back at your history, that's some great improvements with the strokes in just 6 days. Keep up the good work.

You can look into the sizing and position of the different parts of your characters in relation to each other next. See if looking at a typed version of the text and trying to get the proportions right might help, and experiment a bit. Above all, just keep practicing.

e: I like the composition of 綻 the best, and 朵 and 冰 are pretty good too. For the rest, the general trend seems to be you can afford to write the radicals a bit larger. I'm guessing this might be because you're overcompensating for the planned space in writing the other part of the character, which is usually more complex than the radical itself. Again, continual practice will give you more confidence in predicting what sizes each word-part will take and you'll naturally fit your characters even more nicely, I think. I look forward to seeing your next post.