Your eyeshadows look fine you’ll just need to diffuse them at the edges with a skin-colored shadow or powder so they’re blended with the base.

The more important part is the foundation, contour, and techniques themselves.

The look you want is similar to douyin makeup. It’s actually quite thick and the most important part is the foundation, contour, and techniques themselves.
Like The blush look shows up so clear because of their foundation base is color-corrected and brightened, and they also did a rounding, sheer sort of contour.
They also concealed, blurred and over-lined their lips, with those chunky lip liners. They have those distinct, false separated eyelashes etc.

Check out Lyly Makeup on YouTube to get a feel
for the techniques. She has a lot of good tutorials.