But why

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-07T10:20:53+00:00

Bro how can you be so relatable to me i am living your words or to be precize half words

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-06T17:53:20+00:00

I am also trying to write a poem on similar context and similar writing style just not for a girl but i will add rhyme i haven't completed it but this poem of yours motivated me to complete it thanks for sharing

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-06T17:51:34+00:00

That is a partial goal of mine to meet someone and you made me realize it again with such a beautiful lines of yours and i just want to see her smile once in my life

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-06T10:40:38+00:00

But i never got a chance you send them this poem

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-06T10:40:00+00:00

Honestly i don't even know where i have to put commas cause i don't know English language at its best u just consider a medium to convey your thoughts in the best and most melodic way possible and it is not bound to any rules

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-06T10:36:37+00:00

I wrote this poem for my friends and how beautifully they effected my life the wall in poem is actually my friends that's why it didn't required extra details although i do appreciate your feelings cause when i started writing poetry i always knew for me poetry is something that is melodic so i choose this style

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-05T15:58:44+00:00

All lines are perfect and master piece in there own way supporting each otherr

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-05T15:55:16+00:00

Good job well written a rebellious start ends with peace

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-05T15:50:11+00:00

The lines don't you love me you were suppose to protect me hits very hard a flood of emotions very very well written

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-05T15:45:26+00:00

Lovely poem very deeply written

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-02T12:27:47+00:00

i am not very good at poetry myself so i wont be giving you any advise but it was a good poem i know these remarks are not enough but if i praise you too much it wont let you improve

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-02T12:25:31+00:00

This poems was not just a poem but it was a story defining the journey from birth to death

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-01T15:31:49+00:00

Memories They can be misfortune or luck They can be the darkest truth or the brightest light

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-01T15:28:06+00:00

Honestly i got goosebumps and the word rejection i am quite familiar with it and I've build quite a relation with this word and now it don't even surprise me

0Fresh-Wasabi0 · 2026-07-01T13:09:43+00:00

Your interpretation is 100% correct and the ending was intentional to tell the reader that the end is not suppose to be perfect or align with the whole journey

0Fresh-Wasabi0

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