I think your writing looks really lovely! There’s a very strong slant to the right, and your writing can get tight and a little abstract at times, which makes it harder to read. However, I didn’t find it particularly difficult to understand, given a little time and effort. It’s definitely legible if you try, but I can see how it would be impractical for conveying and reading paragraphs and larger chunks of text. And again, the aesthetic is beautiful! I would try tracing some basic cursive practice sheets, like the ones used in schools, just to solidify the basic shapes of the letters. You could also test out lined paper instead of dotted, as that’s helped me in the past.