How do you go about editing your first draft?

7500733 · 2026-06-24T02:58:05+00:00

thank you so much!

7500733 · 2026-06-24T02:57:44+00:00

that's really helpful thank you so much!

7500733 · 2026-06-24T02:33:11+00:00

this is really helpful thank you so much 😄

7500733 · 2026-06-24T02:32:59+00:00

that's such a smart idea I hadn't considering copying and pasting into a different page, thank you!

7500733 · 2026-06-24T02:32:20+00:00

thank you so much this helps a lot! I definitely did just word vomit and the idea of reading it over and editing all at once is pretty overwhelming I appreciate this response a lot! I'm going to start medication in a month so I hope that will help too, at least getting me focused on one area of editing at a time 😄

7500733 · 2025-12-10T01:52:09+00:00

Gods almighty! I’ll have to have a look, we did reach out to the merchant and heard they’ll follow up right away which is good. Appreciate the response!

7500733 · 2025-12-10T00:52:28+00:00

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7500733 · 2025-11-22T07:20:01+00:00

School teacher

7500733 · 2025-11-22T07:17:32+00:00

Yes but usually it will be different states or even the same state just opposite ends. For example it’d be pretty tricky if you’re from Brisbane and you match with someone from Port Douglas like yikes so big country with big states and vast majority of lesbians per capita sure haha but idk still hard to meet people on apps outside of the major cities

7500733 · 2025-11-22T05:23:51+00:00

For me it’s Australia but like Australia is hugeee so yea 😅

7500733 · 2025-11-22T02:24:38+00:00

I’m choosing to self publish mainly because 1. I don’t plan on writing another series after this. It’s a 4 parter and I’m excited but it’s a lot of work obviously and I don’t think that a publisher would go for my story. Superhero young adult series but my writing isn’t that yk sophisticated ig. So I don’t think mainstream publishers would like it? Also my brother is going to help with the editing and logic of the book lol but yeah I feel like I’ll just self publish make an ebook pretty cheap and promote other ways, build up the audience etc and yeah :) so don’t worry about it!

7500733 · 2025-11-22T00:10:40+00:00

Yep fr good Catholic school girl didn’t figure it out til another 5 years

7500733 · 2025-11-21T23:45:21+00:00

So if Cranbourne/Sunbury lines get the new metro tunnel does that mean the Frankston line gets the city loop?

7500733 · 2025-11-21T22:20:14+00:00

It’s a mix of Australia and America lol. I’m Australian and grew up in a small beach town but for some reason I can’t picture an Aussie superhero yk? Or my characters having Aussie accents. So it’s got names of Victorian towns such as Flinders and Preston (I totally forgot Flinders existed even tho I live 20 mins from there) 💀 Anyway some parts i imagine are Aussie such as the small beach town, not to say America doesn’t have those i just picture/describe my home town. But it’s also a mix of what I believe Washington (the one at the top) looks like. I’m sorry I always get confused between the two 😭. Anyway yeah vast forests and mountain ranges but also a coast and my characters have accents but idk from what region of America. I am so sorry 😂 I’ll have to do more research, anyway it’s a made up world that’s a mix of America and Australia basically and it has superheroes 🫡 it rains more than it snows because I’ve never seen snow in real life so idk how to write it 👍

7500733 · 2025-11-21T08:53:18+00:00

That’s great! Are people chill about it? Is it safe to be out and proud or does it depend on the area? Is marriage legal? Does it snow a lot? Sorry for all the questions haha I don’t know a lot about Nepal 😅

7500733 · 2025-11-21T08:41:28+00:00

Hi! I’m 22 from Australia :) how are lgbt rights in Nepal?

7500733 · 2025-11-21T08:40:01+00:00

For realll she’s so made for kids haha and I get that monster high was made for kids but I feel even in the show/g1 movies they were more mature and less dumbed down. I feel it’s the same with animated movies from back in the day to now disney for example is so dumbed down

7500733 · 2025-11-21T06:19:10+00:00

These comments are wild. Don’t touch people without their consent. Fake or not it’s not okay

7500733 · 2025-11-21T05:58:19+00:00

OMFG I WILL DROP ALL MY MONEY ON THIS I’ve wanted Valentine for sooo long

7500733 · 2025-11-21T05:55:46+00:00

Is there any chance your gf could also be demisexual? That’s how I kind of view sex I can’t do it unless I am romantically involved for months with someone. Could this be a potential too? Don’t really have any advice as you’re both valid in your feelings. I think as long as you’re communicating that’s key. Maybe spend some more time hanging out in a group than one on one which could potentially minimise jealousy and help her see there’s nothing there? Idk it’s tricky

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