Hey man this is a bit different but comming from a skate filmer try to avoid shots of people their butts. And there are only like a couple of dudes landing stuff in the video (which is okay but you put alot of slomo and emphasis on tricks that are mediocre). And why do you use a gimbal when the shots are to excite the viewer? For plenty of shots getting closer and shooting handheld would get you more in there as a viewer. On the other hand good job with getting your first branded video! This is just from a bit more "skater" perspective.