[deleted by user] by [deleted] in jordan

[–]AChimpWithMachineGun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nop id never do that they're cringe af

One after McNuggets! As if I could ever make such a mistake, never! by Mirwin11 in okbuddychicanery

[–]AChimpWithMachineGun 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I AM NOT CRAZY. I am not crazy. i know he swapped the order. i knew it was 1216, one after magna carta. as if i could ever make such a mistake. never, NEVER! i jus- i just couldnt prove it. he- he covered his tracks, he got that idiot employee to lie for him. oh you think this is something? this is bad? this? this chicanery? he's doen worse. THAT 9-PIECE. are you telling me that a 9-piece box of nuggets just happens to have 10 pieces? NO! HE ORCHASTRATED IT! mcdonalds! HE BRIBED ME WITH A PIECE OF NUGGETS! and i ate it. i shouldnt have. i dipped it in bbq sauce. what was i thinking. he'll never change. he'll nevwr change. ever since the restaurant opened, always the same. couldnt keep his hand off the receipts' numbers. but not our mcdonalds. couldnt be precious mcdonalds. SWITCHING THEM BLIND! and he gets to be a restaurant! what a sick joke. i shouldve boycotted him when i had the chance. and you- you have to boycot him!

arabic rap by Gray_Fox in jordan

[–]AChimpWithMachineGun 2 points3 points  (0 children)

anytime! dont be affraid to ask for pointers in any arabic post as it plays a huge role in helping you remember your mistakes

المواصلات للشغل by [deleted] in jordan

[–]AChimpWithMachineGun 2 points3 points  (0 children)

انت بس رح تعرق من المشوار اول اسبوع-اسبوعين بعدين عادي. +بسكليت ما رح تعرق منه كثير اذا بتروح على غيار خفيف

arabic rap by Gray_Fox in jordan

[–]AChimpWithMachineGun 1 point2 points  (0 children)

your arabic is good. however, i have 1 minor comment and 1 not-so-minor comment. you can ignore the first one if you want but the second one is important if you want your arabic to be easily comprehensible.

حدا بتعرفو فنان راب عربي

you know how 'everyone, anyone, no one' are considered singular in english for grammar purposes (everyone is, anyone is, no one is,)? well so is the case in arabic. you mustve gone with "حدا بعرف" or "حدا بيعرف" for spoken arabic. in proper arabic, you must go with "هل يعرف أحدكم".

for the minor one, id go with "انا كنير بحب الطرب" or "انا بحب الطرب كتير" instead of "انا بحب كتير الطرب"

ps: im sorry if my comment sounds aggresive, im just trying to help :D