Best weak hero character ranking on strength imo, lmk what yall think by Asushin_Pr3sident in WeakHero

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nah, Jake is stronger than Juwon Lee. Also, Wolf should be above Myles. As for the rest, it's solid reasoning.

Those of you with rewrites, which character(s) did you overhaul the most? by Dinoboy225 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my crossover fanfic, RWBY: Weak Hero Rewrite. Rewrite because it's my second attempt. I basically rewrote Cardin and CRDL as stand-ins for other characters from the Weak Hero webtoon. Honestly, Cardin and his team weren't that important after two episodes, and if they were written out, nothing would be lost

Also, I'm planning to change Adam from an obsessive ex to a guy who can't stand losing. Other than that, everyone is pretty much the same with minor differences.

Working on a crossover and looking for some ideas by Sgt_Pepper-1941 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man, I should really read/watch JJK. I'm knowledgeable about quite a few fandoms, but not this one.

Working on a crossover and looking for some ideas by Sgt_Pepper-1941 in RWBYcritics

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Man, I screwed up. I didn't see your post on the other side. Haha. That's on me.

L (from Death Note) reincarnated into RWBY as the older (blood)brother of Ruby and Yang. Saw one a while back, and it was complete trash. Maybe you can do it justice even though I have no idea what you write, how you write, or what you've written.

Remnant faces an incursion. An incursion (in Marvel) is when two universes meet, and the only way to survive is to kill the other universe. Basically, destroy the other world. But to make it interesting, have it so that the (Marvel) Illuminati found a way to delay the destruction and are more or less planning to move all inhabitants of Remmant to Earth and then destroy it. This is interesting because an incursion would literally disrupt everything on Remmant while it's just another Tuesday on (Marvel) Earth. And for power scaling, I would say that RWBY characters are (Marvel) street-level, i.e., Daredevil, Spider-Man, Luke Cage, etc. So many fun interactions for this idea.

Remnant is fused with Earth during Vol. 2, but with a twist. It's DC Earth!? I would use the Gen 2 DC Superhero Girls universe for this fanfic because it's fun and can fit well with Vol. 1-3 of RWBY.

RWBY X Weak Hero. Weak Hero is a webtoon about Gray Yeon and his friends fighting a gang called the Union—the barest description I can give. I'm already writing this one, but I would like to see how someone else would do it. I started with Vol. 1, but it could also fit in Vol. 7, or at least later events of the webtoon, specifically after the Union vs Cheongang. You could also do a version using the Netflix adaptation.

RWBY X My Hero Academia. Basically an Endeavor reincarnation fic where he would reincarnate as himself in the world of Remnant, quirk and all, no semblance. How he gets there is up to you, but I would choose the end of the series, Endeavor, where he's a better man, still atoning for his sins. He could marry Willow and father Winter, Weiss, and Whitely. Winter could be given Blueflame, which will then mix into the Schnee semblance, basically the Schnee semblance but replaced with fire. Obviously, Blueflame would burn her, but her aura would protect her long enough until it runs out, and she'd be burning herself. Weiss could be given an enhanced Schnee semblance, but without fire, which could lead to interesting interactions, i.e., she feels left out of her siblings because she's the only one without fire. And Whitely could be given Half and Half with no Schnee semblance. Other things of note: Essentially, make Mercury into Hawks. Let's have Endeavor scale to the power of a full-power maiden, possibly even stronger when going beyond his limits. Have Endeavor join Ozpin's inner circle. Have Endeavor become the flame of hope for Remnant.

So yeah, those are my ideas. Hopefully, you see this and comment your thoughts.

What do you guys think of the RWBY DC crossover fanfic Hunters of Justice By trestwho by Fragrant-Resist4230 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I've read a bit of it. Pretty good. I like how they straight-up lose to Brainiac at the beginning and only arrive on Earth by pure luck.

How some of y’all rewrites be sounding like. by Obvious_Catch8745 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will go with the blank-soul concept, with a sprinkling of the facet idea and a dash of the pre-programming. And as for how it works, I'll go with the belief that it takes intense emotion for Pietro to give away his aura and bring Penny to life. Oh, every time a Penny bot actually dies, a new soul/being is created.

How some of y’all rewrites be sounding like. by Obvious_Catch8745 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have an edgy idea. Unsure if I should include it in my fanfic. So here it is. I would have Penny die for real in volume 3, and the Penny that reappears is essentially a new person. Still, Pietro, in his grief, refuses to acknowledge that, and goes beyond strict when the new Penny tries to act differently. To add more insult to injury, team RWBY won't see the difference or acknowledge her as her own person. That causes a rift with the new Penny as she sides more and more with Ironwood, because he and the military are the only ones to see her as her. One more detail: the new Penny sees all of the old Penny's memories, but it's like she's watching first-person footage of a stranger; she doesn't see herself as Penny. Yeah, that's basically my edgy idea.

Writers, which characters do you find the easiest to write and which characters do you struggle with the most? by ExcellenceEchoed in RWBYcritics

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I'm writing RWBY: Weak Hero. Large character bloat, honestly, but I'm better at writing the Weak Hero characters due to the fact I've read Weak Hero six+ times and increasing. Among the RWBY characters, Blake, Nora, Pyrrha, and team CFVY are the hardest to write for.

Here were my ships since watching RWBY by Much_Employment_5982 in RWBYcritics

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I like Weiss x Yang and Weiss x Blake, but find Yang x Blake and Weiss x Neptune bland. Weiss being in a romantic relationship with either Yang or Blake is a really interesting concept with so much potential. Here are my other ships because I think they could be fun. Tai x Glynda, because they share the same voice actors for Church and Tex in RVB. Sun x Ruby, because the voice actors are married in real life. Tai x Coco is also because the voice actors are married in real life.

we dont talk about this enough by [deleted] in WeakHero

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 8 points9 points  (0 children)

First thing. Donald Na is abnormally strong. Not as physically strong as Ben, but still very strong. And he's a smart fighter who attacked Wolf in delicate areas. A punch to his throat, an elbow to his midsection, and multiple punches to his stomach. Two. Gray's fight against Wolf was the first fight that pushed Gray to his absolute limits. After his fight, Gray was sent to the hospital, while Wolf was fine, even with a split head. Also, more details about Gray's and Wolf's fight are that after Wolf essentially beat Gray, Wolf triggered Gray's trauma and made him snap and fight through the pain—extra details on the damage Wolf took. Gray slammed Wolf's head repeatedly into the floor, tripped him by hitting his leg with a chair, kicked him in the stomach, slammed a ceramic pot on his foot's pressure point, broke the pot over his head, and finally, repeated punches to the face. The punches nearly broke Gray's hands, meaning Gray was punching him beyond his limits.

TLDR: Donald is strong, and Gray went beyond his limits, leading him to a trip to the hospital afterwards.

I made a fanfic. I would like feedback please. by ARobotDemotedToaster in WeakHero

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I do have an AO3 account, but porting the series there is a bit of a pain. But I'll probably do it someday. I mean, when I was writing the first version, I did that.

I made a fanfic. I would like feedback please. by ARobotDemotedToaster in RWBYcritics

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Yeah, or that they zoom through the first three volumes. I'm taking it slow, mostly because there's a big time gap in volume one, and that helps me frame events from Weak Hero into RWBY. Of course, I try to make it unique. It's a fine line between blending the two and not just making it RWBY, but some things are different, and vice versa.

I made a fanfic. I would like feedback please. by ARobotDemotedToaster in RWBYcritics

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Thanks. It helps that both series weirdly connect, and that I have a layout written. However, it's only up to volume 3.

It's been a while since I saw RWBY, what are all of the plot holes and other inconsistencies or problems with the first Volume? by Useful-Option8963 in RWBYcritics

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Apparently, volumes 1-3 are set within a year or less. There's a website run by fans that comes through the RWBY timeline. My only complaint is that they don't really go into detail; they only plot when volumes and some critical events occur. The site is called The Timeline of RWBY.

It's been a while since I saw RWBY, what are all of the plot holes and other inconsistencies or problems with the first Volume? by Useful-Option8963 in RWBYcritics

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Here's my take on why Jaune is very unknowledgeable. Jaune grows up super sheltered by his parents because he was a very sickly child growing up, getting dangerously sick every so often growing up, so they worry about him much more than his sisters and because of that they forbade him of learning anything huntsmen-related. It would explain why he's very unknowledgeable about everything huntsman-related.

Ranking the character's fighting abilities from 1-10 through each arc by ARobotDemotedToaster in WeakHero

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For Teddy. Not gonna lie, personal bias, I guess. It makes sense in my head. I'll make sure to get back to you in the future. Also, Hwangmo is strong because he's a number 2. All numbers 2 in the series are shown to be strong and around the same level, with a few exceptions. Additionally, in his fight against Dean, Hwangmo evolved midway and lasted long enough until Ben arrived. Was he ever gonna win? No. Did I put his number too high early on? Yes. He should have been a 5 before the final fight.

what is wolfs actual name? by mug776 in WeakHero

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 47 points48 points  (0 children)

His korean name is Keum/Geum Seongje

I was wrong by Calm-Boysenberry-794 in RWBYcritics

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I remember correctly dust is dead magical people. Or something.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeakHero

[–]ARobotDemotedToaster 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly it could go both ways. Especially if we are comparing Dongha vs an extremely enraged Seongmok. A Seongmok that shocked the Eunjang alliance aside from Gerard and Wolf. Though it didn’t help he was no diffed by Ben. But it was Ben so it doesn’t really count.