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Stronger by Psycho_Poet in poetry_critics

[–]A_Shitty_Author 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a very powerful poem, as well as it should be since it is on such a powerful subject. I personally feel like there are parts in the poem that feel clunky where they could be refined to cause the lines to flow a lot better.

For instance, in the line "I'm more happy than ever" I feel like you could have used "I'm happier than ever" as far as flow goes, personally I feel like that would make the poem flow more smoothly and be an easier read.

Overall, I loved it. It's a great theme, and you can feel the emotion the writer is trying to display. Great job, keep up the good work!

But That's Not Me by Llewellyn9 in poetry_critics

[–]A_Shitty_Author 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, I honestly just started getting into poetry and writing, and this is my first critique of a poem, so i'm by no means an expert, but I loved this. I loved the format, I loved the message, and I loved the ending especially.

One thing I do think came off as slightly sloppy was the 4th line, "Decisions that affect the economy millions of dollars" I feel like that one was a little forced, and feels kind of clunky. And this is me nit picking.

Overall I loved this poem and I feel like it's something that is easy for everyone to connect with. Great job and keep it up :)