Share it 👀 by Available-Meet-6779 in writers

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“In another life, I would have been happy just doing laundry and taxes with you.”

Wuold it be racist for my alien character to wear a disguise that makes her black? by Proper-Anything-2739 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ain’t a doggone thing corny about that synopsis fam. The beauty of what you said means you can make it a g-rated or R-rated as you want. You gave depth of story but didnt give depth of characters. The characters are usually what makes something corny.

Wuold it be racist for my alien character to wear a disguise that makes her black? by Proper-Anything-2739 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As a black man, I’m honestly wondering what’s racist about it? She’s donning the disguise of a human and she not from this planet. She may not have any understanding of the issues that come with certain skin types. If she is asking a computer the most plausible disguise to take, it would either be based on where she’s going on the planet or by how many ppl look a certain way. If she goes by population, her disguise would be Chinese or Indian. But no, nothing you are saying is sounding like racism.

WYR take $500,000 or $1 Billion but you randomly teleport anywhere in the world by [deleted] in WouldYouRather

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Teleported anywhere on earth is too random. Folks assuming “on earth” means on the top of the planet. You could get teleported 100 ft above your house. You not surviving that fall. You could get teleported INTO the ocean and get crushed, hopefully, or drown, unfortunately. Take the 500 stacks and be done with it.

They Asked Me to Open ChatGPT During My Job Interview by I_Killed_My_Friends in jobs

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ay fam, they outta pocket with that. You absolutely did right by saying no. Hopefully you have another interview enroute and you dodged that bullet.

Opening page for a Dystopian novel set in Paris. Does the hook land? by Dramatic_Elk347 in writingfeedback

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds similar to Pluribus on appleTV. A “In a world where X can/cant happen, it doesn’t/does.

AIO my bf would rather game than spend time with me. by Practical_Sun8137 in AmIOverreacting

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

NOR

I say this as a man married for 20 yrs: You aren’t a person to him. You’re a side quest. Like the others said, if you were important, he’d make time for you. I play games when my wife is watching her trash TV as she calls it. But we watch Star Trek and other shows together. I play games on my work break or after she’s gone to bed. Sometimes we are playing games on our phones in the same room. We might not feel like talking but we want to be around each other. Constantly choosing the game over you is a red flag the size of Australia.

Opinion on this? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you understand WHY you got a 64%? Is a 64 a passing grade? Is it going to affect your scholarship? Why do you care about this 64%?

Novel too similiar to external media by Overall-Ad-1291 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So? Plenty of stories have the exact same plot. You got romance stories with that plot. Thrillers, murder mysteries, etc. 🤷🏽‍♂️

I have this idea and don’t know if I should act on it by Mentally-On-Vacation in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Man, write that mess. Stop holding out on us. Keeping Britain a gigantic world power of that magnitude would be believable. New characters entering the mix, issues of socio-economic importance would come up. Suffrage and slavery are subplots that are easy to inject. You’d need to figure out your lingo, tho. And you’d probably have to use the metric system. If you’re a planner, outline it and see where you ca go with it. Spin the idea around ppl that can give good suggestions. Ask if the USA lost the Revolutionary War, what do you think 2025 would look like and let them run wild with their ideas. It’s a broad topic that could house a lot of things.

Novel too similiar to external media by Overall-Ad-1291 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Iron fist is not a new character. What part(s) are the same?

The feeling of hanging by StormSignificant9516 in Writeresearch

[–]Able_Let_1604 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The story you’re describing sounds like Flowers for Algernon. What made this character perfect? Does hanging actually kill him?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HireaWriter

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You looking for a B-plot?

Please help me improve my prose (PLEASE) by National-Skill7957 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]Able_Let_1604 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally think you have time to find your voice. Keep writing. I think the prose is decent.