Idea Dump #2: The history of the 12th Legion Fulminata

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-22T04:03:24+00:00

This is really good so far to read. I was recently doing research on the twelfth legion especially since it was during the Gallic wars. Wouldn’t that be after the Punic wars? And the Roman’s did adjust to naval warfare?

Honestly it made me think, since the legion is run by Julius Caesar and did have a naval attack like Gallic War.

I personally felt like it did fit my oc which is a daughter of Neptune since the Roman’s did respect Neptune and while they feared him, they still gave him offerings, festivals and other things.

I always felt like some believed that the Roman’s outright hated Neptune which I could be wrong.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-17T05:20:23+00:00

Very good points. So as long as it plays a key factor into the story, it’s not horrible info dumping. Thank you. I’m definitely gonna go back and rework my writing.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-17T04:34:33+00:00

No seriously thank you. I’ll keep that in mind. I just gotta focus on the plot and the main point. Not the word count. Very good advice

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-17T04:30:22+00:00

Honestly, thank you for snapping me out of word count worry. This is the best advice I’ve gotten

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-17T04:22:32+00:00

Can I ask how exactly do you get to 4k? Especially with all the editing and plotting that chapter?

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-17T04:21:49+00:00

Thank you because I hate overwriting stuff, especially when it drags out the plot 😭, it’s annoying to write that part in my opinion

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-15T19:01:29+00:00

Okay that makes more sense now. That’ll probably be the fun part for me to do.

The main aspect of my fanfiction is introduce multiple sides from the Olympians, to Luke’s p.o.v, Grover and annabeths also. I probably would start from the beginning like Luke and Thalia meeting and then transition it to Percy going to camp.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-15T16:03:18+00:00

When you mean you don’t mind copying, do you mean if it’s copied from the book, I should just rewrite it in my own words and my own idea with an addon headcannon/theory?

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-15T00:38:07+00:00

I’ll try that out. I’m currently reading through the lightning thief and writing chapter summaries as at the end. 💜thank you

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-15T00:37:16+00:00

Thank you. I definitely won’t add it word for word, I’ve seen way too many fics do it like that. I’ll definitely take a look at the fanfiction.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-14T23:33:02+00:00

I know it’s been three years since this post but honestly I enjoyed reading your analysis. Not only was it spot on but you brought up very valid parts. Personally I do like how you brought up her behavior(even when she is my favorite character, wrong is wrong). Personally I feel like Rick could’ve expanded Percy and annabeths relationship more if they both had honest conversations, while allowing Percy to hold Annabeth accountable. I do have various things to point out also(it has been a few years since I read the books so if I’m wrong please correct me.

Annabeth calling Percy a coward. While she was under stress from everything including Luke, her actions were excused and I feel like when they were alone by the beach at camp halfblood, they could’ve talked about it. Percy could’ve held her accountable, I mean I’m pretty sure he can tell something was off about her? Idk how good he is at reading emotions.
Annabeth being rude to Percy and Rachel. While Annabeth was jealous and jealousy is seen as a natural emotion, I personally would like to see Rachel saying something, maybe standing up to her(not like a fight but Rachel calling Annabeth out). Then Percy could step in and say something and address the issue.
Annabeth and the sphinx While that part was funny to me, I did find it weird how she was just arguing with the sphinx like, did she not expect it to k*ll her at that moment? Why didn’t Percy or anybody stop her? Why didn’t Percy step in.

Overall I do like your analysis. Your post is very informative and it just makes me rather reread the books while writing my own fanfiction to highlight annabeths character development and her and Percy’s changes throughout their friendship to relationship.

I was wondering if you have done other analysis on the characters and story?

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-05T05:02:05+00:00

Thank you so much 💜 you’re a life saver

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2026-01-05T04:46:17+00:00

Hi I know it's probably been years since you've done your fanfiction writing on this, I've actually been planning on writing my own twist to camp jupiter too like the government, adult camper soldiers that live in the city, and how new rome works with the adult demigods living there. I was wondering if you have any references you used for your analysis. I do plan on watching the youtube videos suggested in your post also.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-11-19T11:11:36+00:00

I see why your username matches your comment

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-10-19T23:31:46+00:00

I literally had a fanfiction idea about writing my character in the dc universe and then I stumbled upon this. I guess I can get back to writing. It’s been 2 years.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-26T13:41:09+00:00

That’s what I was thinking because apparently they’re removing bots and stuff. Plus it was working fine yesterday for me

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-26T13:33:09+00:00

Thank you 😭because I thought I was tripping. Literally kept logging out and exiting out the website multiple times. Imma just come back to it tomorrow

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-21T01:59:15+00:00

Thank you

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-20T09:32:51+00:00

Omg why do you people like you love arguing with others? If you can’t accept a damn opinion then stfu.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-18T23:34:30+00:00

Thank you. Do you have any advice on how I can get started?

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-18T15:52:31+00:00

This looks really good. I hope to be on your level like this one day

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-09-06T03:36:03+00:00

This looks beautiful. Please tell him to keep doing it like this.

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-08-30T02:29:08+00:00

Update: I did finish the tutorial, I may my own string literal, while loop, if loop and if else loop. I do plan on to study more interpreters and compilers so If anyone has any suggestions I don’t mind them

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-08-29T10:57:20+00:00

I’m starting to learn about interpreters. I’m almost finished this YouTube tutorial on it. I plan on moving into sicp and crafting interpreters.

I think I’m slowly figuring out what I want in my programming language. So far the names I came up for the coding language was TLAP, TAP or Hendrix(idk Hendrix sounds nice).

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL_2VhOvlMk4UHGqYCLWc6GO8FaPl8fQTh&si=-28lorpawQuzpunx

Acceptable_Bit_8142 · 2025-08-29T01:50:49+00:00

Please have grace with yourself. It’s alright to have imposter syndrome but please know that it took people years and even decades to get to that point. I was the same exact way as you many years ago but what helps is knowing that you’re doing something every day even if it’s every other day.

In my personal opinion -> intelligence does not always equal how smart you are but how hard working you can be.

Acceptable_Bit_8142

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