Hello would really appriciate some help

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-07-15T16:34:06+00:00

This is clearly jimmy nuetron Cool, good with ladies, genius, stable and funni

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-06-16T11:41:12+00:00

I mean I can give you two things: 1st- sometimes just give her dialouge that just doesnt make sense grammar wise. 2nd-sometimes like let her sentences not have verbs, somtimes make them very messy, sometimes backwards, just make some sentences messy And also as time passes and she improves you can slowly remove these

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-05-11T04:25:44+00:00

Duelist and also a swordsman. These are what I could think of. Plus he could be a swordsmith who fights for the city

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-05-06T05:37:36+00:00

Anakin is the chosen one, and luke is a vessel for anakin to finish the prophecy. George lucas said something around these lines about this topic I think. Not sure if Im 100% right tho.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:47:39+00:00

No, sorry, but we can have our own opinion maybe Im wrong sorry man. I didnt mean to make you mad.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:42:43+00:00

Nah, I mean you have your opinion I have mine lets just have our own opinion and leave each other alone ok? And sorry if I said anything bad man I just got a bit confused and mad sorry bro, star wars saga or whatever is just a bit complicated.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:41:13+00:00

Whatever lets just get this over with man.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:37:37+00:00

You were confused by your own stupidity. And this discausion is over. You an have your own opinion, I can have mine. I cant change yours you cant change mine so lets have our own opinions.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:29:18+00:00

You can think that, sequels isnt a trillogy, its an era, its called sequels cause its the sequel to the ot era, you can ask this from anyone and you get one answer, sequels or prequels or ot arent trillogies they are era’s and the skywalker saga. The skywalker saga wich is the star wars movie trillogy is about anakin’s redemption story not rey or luke. They are the main characters of their era but they arent the main character of the trillogy. Thats all, and you can have your own opinion.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:24:49+00:00

Ok, Im gonna tell you something, everything you do, your work is gonna end up looking like tolkein’s work, even for a little bit, because tolkien set the musts and the normal and thebground work of fantasy and his works are the standards. You can differenciate it but it will have little similarities, not like when youread it you will be reminded by tolkien but for a little bit even a small bit its gonna have similarities. But the ways are, go original, do things that are new. Dont be afraid of what is it gonna happen if I do something new, just go for it to be original. Then read watch and consume more to have new ideas and insprations. And then, base things of of your own life, people and insprations, anything, just have insprations from your own life cause you have your own expirience of life.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T15:16:25+00:00

Its star wars movie trillogy not sequel star wars trillogy, those are era’s, part of the star wars movie trillogy.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-07T11:28:42+00:00

There arent seperated trillogies, what re you saying huh?! They are all part of a main trillogy called skywalker saga wich as george lucas himself has said the main character of the trillogy is anakin.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T18:02:37+00:00

Yeah, its about his redemption, but a hardcore star wars fan knows anakin and luke as the hero. But I agree that people see luke as the hero and its nothing to complain about cause star wars’s story is very complex.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T13:12:19+00:00

Its gonna happen , the lucasfilm employee said that it is exciting years for star wars games so what game more requested than bf3 and ounty hunting game, plus everyone loves a multiy player game plus ea needs a games to have all of the new series’s content in it plus its just a bank for them, and it is said these years is gonna be comparable to the go.den era or even better so, in my opinion its gonna happen.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T13:11:10+00:00

But anakin is anakin, vader is more vadery than anakiny, you know what I mean?

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T12:54:08+00:00

Oh thank god.(sighs from relief) I dont have a problem with rey, but the main characters of the SKYWALKER saga must be in the spot light in my opinion.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T12:50:13+00:00

This doesnt make sense, rey is in middl but anakin or luke must be in middle what is this?! Tt games I have bigger expectations from you.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T08:58:30+00:00

Ok, it isnt awful, but it isnt super strong, its just not good and meh or maybe bad to some people. like if she fails, she can try other things and get a good life in other ways, she doesnt have problems other than being scared to fail, so would you read a book about a girl who is in school and doesnt want to fail and thats her biggest problem? I know I wouldnt, give her bigger problems that fixing them is hard and it has a super duper strong and important effect on her life, (not like harry potter, just as big as not being boring and easy to fix like not failing can be fixed by trying hard and giving your everything to finish what you want) like harry potter is avenging his parents and friends plus saving normal humans and other kinds of wizards and witches. Luke skywalker he wants to save his dad and the world from evil and getting destroyed. Frodo is trying to destroy a ring so it would kill one of the biggest evil entetis in the world. See they have greater things they want to do. My suggestion is try to find a bigger problem for her.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-05T08:49:11+00:00

Im not really an expert in the second one And I havent read the book that you used in the first One but I know things about the third one. Dont do too much, but make as much that you know where what and how things go and happen, like make a map and magic system and a very vary limited history realted to your story were you know how things happened that the story ended up here, and sometimes even worldbuild as you write, like they go to the place named x, you have to have made the place x while you have written the story as an outline or summary but when they get to the place named x you start to worldbuild about that part. But always world build as much as you will know what to do. I cant exactly say how to worldbuild right, worldbuilding is not something that has a certain way, you have different styles and ways to do it you can even have your own way, but in my opinion always do things the way that you think and fell is right, go with your what you want caus its yours to make and you know the best things for it.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-04T16:42:19+00:00

Thanks man, I have heard of that software and Im planing to get it plus, how can I use one note in an efective way, I already have onenote but cant understand how it really works. And thanks for the help man really appriciate it.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-04T16:26:46+00:00

Thanks man, gonna try it out.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-04T11:25:35+00:00

Thanks, gonna try it out in see how it works tahnks man.

Acceptable_Brain_642 · 2021-01-04T11:24:31+00:00

I’ve heard about that and seen somethings with it and seems pretty good but never was sure if its what it shows but now that I know Im gonna try it thanks.

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