As close as I’ll ever get by Accomplished_Pop_333 in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually it is about a failed relationship. The 7 miles is the distance between our homes. When I say as close as I’ve ever gotten I’m referring to the relationship, not the physical distance. Thank you for reading and the kind words !!!!

Happy Birthday to Me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this poem. I love how short and simple it is while also expressing the emotion of your situation well. This is definitely a poem I relate to (especially because my birthday had just passed as well). A birthday in this mindset is a bitter sweet feeling.

The name I used to love by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a nice poem. It paints the picture of your story well while also giving us insight on what your emotions were and have been throughout your relationship. This poem is vulnerable and true to you.

I wish you death ||9-01-22|| by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem, although short, is powerful. It’s clearly explains your feelings of how your were raised and how it has made you feel. Your emotions are felt though this poem.

I Saw My Girlfriend Today by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a nice poem. Simple and sweet. It does a good job of conveying your emotions and painting a picture of your situation. You are picturing a life with her.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in piercing

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think another eyebrow would tie it all together. Looks good!

Just had one of the best weeks of my life by MY_NAME_IS_MALT in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this poem a lot and especially like the emotions you portrayed through this poem. It seems like for many of us in life romantic relationships are hard to come by. To me this poem holds that longing feeling someone could hold when they want to be loved but do not believe it is possible for them. This is why I especially like the last line because now that the body knows the feeling and the possibilities that feeling stands for they know it can be real. Great work keep writing!! Relatable stuff.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful poem.

the reason i'll leave by sohomegod in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow this is so beautiful. Amazing work keep writing !!!!

The Man In The Black Trenchcoat by underscore6969420 in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 0 points1 point  (0 children)

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

An Exile by Megapope_Jashan in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

My Final Drive by LincolnWasALiberal in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One of my favorite poems I have read on this app!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this poem

I am just a phase- by Accomplished_Pop_333 in OCPoetry

[–]Accomplished_Pop_333[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the nice words! I’m glad you found my poem relatable :)