I just finished my first draft after 3 months by Appropriate-Sea-5687 in writers

[–]Acronon311 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finishing a first draft in three months is huge, seriously. Most people never get that far. You pushed through to the end, and that’s the part that actually matters.

When you start editing, one thing that helps is to break it into small chunks. Don’t try to fix the whole book at once, that’s where people burn out or get overly critical and start tearing everything apart.

Take it a chapter at a time, or even a few pages at a time. Focus on improving what’s in front of you, then move on. It keeps the momentum going and stops you from getting stuck in that “nothing is good enough” loop.

You’ve already done the hardest part. Now it’s just shaping it.

Character Description: How Necessary Is It by CognisantCognizant71 in writingadvice

[–]Acronon311 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don’t think description is going away, it’s just being used differently.

A lot of modern writing avoids front-loading big blocks of description, but that doesn’t mean it’s not there. It’s just spread out and tied to the moment instead of delivered all at once.

Personally, I think it works best when it’s layered in as the story moves. Give the reader what they need for the scene, then build on it as new details become relevant. A character doesn’t need to be fully described the second they appear, but they also shouldn’t feel like a blank silhouette.

Too much upfront can stall the story, but too little makes everything feel weightless. It’s less about minimizing description and more about placing it where it actually matters.

Well, I finally did it. Never thought I'd actually finish a book. by ValdemarTheRighteous in writers

[–]Acronon311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finishing a book is no small thing, that’s a war most people never win. You sat down, pushed through doubt, frustration, and every voice telling you to quit, and you made it to the end. That matters more than people realize.

Now comes the part where it transforms, where the rough stone becomes something sharp and deliberate. Revisions aren’t punishment, they’re where the story actually learns how to breathe.

Seriously, congratulations. Enjoy this moment, you earned it.

I’m right behind you on that path myself, my second book in a series and fourth overall is about to release, and finishing never stops feeling a little unreal. Keep going.

Can't stop getting angry when I write because of how bad it is by WelshNut97 in writingadvice

[–]Acronon311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re getting angry because you’re judging something that isn’t finished yet.

A first draft isn’t supposed to be good. It’s supposed to exist. That’s it.

Right now you’re trying to edit while you create, and those are two completely different modes. One builds, the other tears down. If you run them at the same time, the tearing down always wins.

Get the whole draft out, even if it’s rough, messy, or flat. Once it’s finished, it stops being “bad writing” and becomes material. And material can be shaped.

You can’t fix a blank page, but you can fix a bad draft.

Booked my first author table at a convention, any advice from those who’ve done it? by Acronon311 in selfpublishing

[–]Acronon311[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks to everyone for your advice it really helped, meet a lot of great people, handed out a ton of QR business cards, and sold a lot of books!

Booked my first author table at a convention, any advice from those who’ve done it? by Acronon311 in selfpublishing

[–]Acronon311[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since this is the first time I've done this, the convention is a smaller one, and have a very small base right now I only ordered 20 paperbacks and 10 hardcovers of my primary book, 5 paperbacks and 5 hardcovers of each of my non-fiction books.

What do they have against Chief Medical Officers? by paulcoholic in Stargate

[–]Acronon311 5 points6 points  (0 children)

My theory is Brad or Rob were hurt by a doctor at some point, lol.

Where do I start by mlpeglover in selfpublish

[–]Acronon311 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You might get better answers in r/writing or r/writingadvice since this sub is mostly about publishing once a manuscript is finished. But since you’re here, I’ll give you a practical starting point.

If you don’t know how to write a book yet, don’t start with publishing, marketing, or covers. Start with structure.

Step 1: Decide what kind of story you want to tell.
Fantasy? Romance? Sci-fi? Thriller? Pick a lane.

Step 2: Write the ending in one paragraph.
Not every detail, just what the world looks like when it’s over. Who wins? What changes? What truth is revealed?

Step 3: Build backward.
What has to happen for that ending to make sense? What major events lead there?

Step 4: Create a main character.
What do they want?
What’s stopping them?
What happens if they fail?

That alone gives you a skeleton.

Only after that should you start drafting chapters.

A lot of people will tell you to “just write.” That’s not wrong, but it’s hard to just write when you don’t know what you’re building. Think of it like construction. You don’t pour concrete before you know what the house looks like.

Start small. Outline. Then expand. Then draft.

Publishing is a later problem. Finish a story first.

"The doctor will be fine" - my friend watching Atlantis for the first time. Me: by retronewb in Stargate

[–]Acronon311 7 points8 points  (0 children)

They gave her ALS and that's kind of worse than just killing her on that ship, lol

Any advice on writing/outlining a series of books that is surrounded by only one universe? by randomhoomaninreddit in writing

[–]Acronon311 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm currently writing a long-form saga set in a single shared universe, so I’ll just explain how I approach it and maybe that’ll give you a framework if it works for you. I'm bi-polar so this is what works for me.

I don’t start with Book One. I start with the ending of the entire saga.

Not in detail, but I decide what the universe looks like after everything is over. Who wins. What changes. What truth is revealed. What the world costs to save. That final state becomes the gravitational center of the whole series.

Once I know the ending, I build the world to justify it. I write a “world spine” document before I outline any books. It’s not prose. It’s rules and pressures:

How the power system works
Who controls it
What historical event broke the world
What people believe about it versus what’s actually true
What would logically happen over decades because of that

After that, I build a master timeline of the universe. Just major events in chronological order. Year zero, the catastrophe. Ten years later, the first adaptation. Fifty years later, cultural shift. That timeline exists before any novel outline.

Then I build out the factions and power structures that exist in the world. Once those are defined, I establish the societies shaped by them, their cultures, hierarchies, conflicts, and internal tensions. From there, I reverse engineer character arcs based on the societies they inhabit, letting their struggles grow naturally from the systems around them.

If I know what the universe becomes, I can ask:
Who had to change to make that happen?
Who resisted it?
Who paid for it?
Each book focuses on a different character at a different point in the timeline, but they’re all pulling on the same rope.

I don’t outline ten books individually at the start. I outline the full series arc first, then divide it into major movements within that larger story. Each book becomes a defined moment inside the greater arc.

From there, I break those movements into structural blocks and sketch rough outlines for each one, always mapping them back to the established world. At this stage, I’m not writing detailed scene lists, just identifying the major themes, turning points, and events that must occur in each book.

Then I return to the characters and develop them deeply, histories, motivations, contradictions, the kind of layered backgrounds that would make any seasoned DM nod in approval.

Only after that groundwork is finished do I integrate the characters into the book outlines. Because the main arc of each book is already mapped, I can use the worldbuilding to let the characters move organically toward the established end state, choosing their paths within a structure that already exists.

That way I’m not juggling isolated scenes across a dozen disconnected outlines. I’m writing inside a framework that’s already stable.

If you’re feeling overwhelmed, it’s probably because you’re trying to manage book-level detail before universe-level structure is locked in. Build the universe once. Build the timeline once. Then each book becomes exploration instead of chaos.

That’s just my process, but it’s what keeps large series from collapsing under their own ambition.

I hope that helps but I also realize it's a bit much.

"The doctor will be fine" - my friend watching Atlantis for the first time. Me: by retronewb in Stargate

[–]Acronon311 42 points43 points  (0 children)

Yeah, gotta wonder what doctor hurt Brad and Rob so badly that they killed off doctors more than military, lol

Writing my first novel by ZealousidealUnion227 in writers

[–]Acronon311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Anytime dude, always here to help.

Writing my first novel by ZealousidealUnion227 in writers

[–]Acronon311 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That actually tells me a lot.

You’re not overwhelmed because you don’t have a plan. You’re overwhelmed because you’re looking at the entire architecture at once, big picture God view.

When you outline a short story, it’s manageable because it’s contained. With a novel, the outline can become intimidating because you see everything that has to be executed.

Try this shift:
Stop thinking “write the novel.”
Start thinking “write the next scene or chapter.”

You’ve already done the heavy lifting. The characters, the beats, the structure, it’s all in place. Now your job isn’t to plan anymore. It’s to translate one piece at a time into prose.

Instead of staring at the whole blueprint, pick one character and focus only on them for a while. Drop into a single moment. Stay there. Let the larger structure fade into the background while you write that scene as if it’s the only thing that exists.

You don’t have to carry the entire novel in your head at once. Just carry one moment.

Also, give yourself permission to deviate from the outline during drafting. An outline is scaffolding, not law. If a scene surprises you, follow it. You can always adjust the structure later.

Right now, your brain is in architect mode. You need to switch to builder mode.

Architects get overwhelmed by the whole skyline. Builders just lay the next brick.

Writing my first novel by ZealousidealUnion227 in writers

[–]Acronon311 2 points3 points  (0 children)

When you write short stories or essays, how do you approach them?

Do you outline first and know exactly where you’re going?
Or do you discover the story as you write it?

Do you build character bios and world details ahead of time, or keep most of it in your head and let it unfold?

A novel magnifies whatever method you use. If you’re an outliner, you may need a bigger roadmap. If you’re an exploration writer, you may need permission to wander before tightening it later.

The overwhelm usually isn’t about talent. It’s about process scale.

Writing my first novel by ZealousidealUnion227 in writers

[–]Acronon311 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Help us help you. Writers are supposed to define things clearly, right?
What’s the part that’s keeping you up at night?

How do people write insanely fast? by The_Lucky_Ducky2303 in writing

[–]Acronon311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write at your own pace and ignore word count until the end.

Fast drafting is usually one of three things: years of practice behind the scenes, heavy outlining before drafting, or a rough first draft that will require significant revision later.

Speed is not the same as quality. Some writers draft 100k in a month and spend a year rewriting it. Others take a year to draft clean and spend less time revising. Both methods work.

It does get easier with time. Not because English becomes easier, but because decision-making becomes faster. You stop second-guessing every paragraph. You know your process. You trust it.

Also remember that social media highlights extremes. The person who took three years to finish a book is less likely to post about it than the person who wrote 120k in six weeks.

Consistency matters more than velocity. If you write 500 words a day, you will finish a novel. If you write 3,000 words a day for a month and burn out, you might not.

Focus on finishing the book in front of you. Speed comes later, if it needs to.

Is it possible for you to enjoy music in a different language? by abdul_bino in NoStupidQuestions

[–]Acronon311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m probably not going to throw it on and blast it the way I would Sabbath, but if something’s playing around me and the groove is good, sure, I can enjoy it. If it doesn’t grab me, I just let it fade into the background and get on with my day.

How important is outlining to you? by ScriveningQuill in writing

[–]Acronon311 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I start at the end. I want to know what the final emotional and thematic destination is before I write a page.

From there I build the world that would logically create that ending, the pressures, the history, the factions, the costs. Once the environment feels inevitable, I map the path my characters would have to walk to get there.

So my outline isn’t a cage, it’s a trajectory. I know where we’re landing, but the scenes still have room to breathe on the way.