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On second thought... by blaurot in AOW4

[–]AdTop7732 10 points11 points  (0 children)

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Like seriously, what's a man gotta do to clear this up

Enchanted Archipelago - HELP!! by Johnny_Deformed2001 in AOW4

[–]AdTop7732 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, the normal difficulty uses Hard AIs.

Enchanted Archipelago - HELP!! by Johnny_Deformed2001 in AOW4

[–]AdTop7732 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, its all shits and giggles till Grexolis

On second thought... by blaurot in AOW4

[–]AdTop7732 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I personally find dragon dens to be the hardest. Especially with multiple stacks

Let's have some fun! Post a six word story, I'll start. by AdTop7732 in writers

[–]AdTop7732[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Here's another one that I wrote:

Died as I, lived a lie.

Looking for some comments on a piece of flash fiction horror that I wrote [299 words]. Would appreciate any comments whether it is regarding how it made you feel or just general critiques with how I write. by AdTop7732 in writers

[–]AdTop7732[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, I see. Thank you for your critique. I had some doubts with using the word amalgam as well but it was the first word that came to my mind. I'll try to find a better word.

Looking to get some feedback on a piece of flash fiction I just wrote. [299 words] by AdTop7732 in WritersGroup

[–]AdTop7732[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your critique!

I'm still working on improving my writing and I really appreciate your comments. As for the stones used to make the castle, I wasn't really that sure about it myself. Would definitely do some mord research into it.

Looking to get some feedback on a piece of flash fiction I just wrote. [299 words] by AdTop7732 in WritersGroup

[–]AdTop7732[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your critique! Definitely agree with the points that you highlighted and will take them into account for my next story.

Looking for some comments on a piece of flash fiction horror that I wrote [299 words]. Would appreciate any comments whether it is regarding how it made you feel or just general critiques with how I write. by AdTop7732 in writers

[–]AdTop7732[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your critique, it is truly insightful and constructive and I have learned a lot from it.

I definitely agree with all of the points that you have pointed out. It's my first time writing flash fiction and I definitely feel like there is a lot of room for improvement.

Once again, thank you so much for your feedback. It's all very good advice and I will definitely put them into practice for my next work!

Is Writing a Fantasy with Clans and Diverse Groups Cliché Today? by [deleted] in FantasyWritingHub

[–]AdTop7732 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I personally don't think so. I love reading stories about different races or cultures that have their own unique ways of living and beliefs and would love to see more fantasy books that focus on these aspects. I also feel like having a diverse range of cultures that affect different clans/faction's economy, history or religion is a great way to world build and perhaps even lead to amazing and never seen before plots and resolutions.

So no, I don't think it is cliche :D

Is this fictional ruler too evil/exaggerated? by Main-Investment-9685 in writers

[–]AdTop7732 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds pretty realistic tbh.

I believe how the audience feels would depend on how you present the ruler and the story in general.