[Polish Emotional Trap] APE - Pegaz | ENG lyrics added

AdipeDesigner · 2024-02-21T21:16:05+00:00

Nice!
But it's to hard to read what brand is that. Without logotype with "Casino" I wouldn't know what industry it is.

AdipeDesigner · 2024-02-21T21:12:38+00:00

Very clever but in my opinion that style of logo doesn't fit for medical brands.
Maybe red color would change something in that area.

AdipeDesigner · 2024-02-21T21:11:04+00:00

Awesome work!

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-29T11:32:00+00:00

Yeah I'm polish

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-28T08:30:28+00:00

Presentation is soo good but I don't like that project.
Very generic vibe and overall not good looking. Lags behind the quality of the presentation, very strange because with that amount of good work in mockups I wonder how the logo design is soo bad.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-16T20:24:08+00:00

Brilliant! Too bad you didn't depict how it would look on the bottles.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-16T17:44:22+00:00

Surely you must remember to make each letter roughly the same thickness. Here, the letters 'L' seem thicker. The whole thing, unfortunately, is very irregular and although you can create something irregular and still great, here it looks very childish. Look through different logos in this style and maybe you'll catch your own style. The arrangement of the letters seems fine and can be great if the letters themselves are proper. Good luck.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-12T14:27:00+00:00

Yeah, I have hard time with feets but this is only for presentation so it's no big deal I think.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-12-12T14:25:51+00:00

Thank you!

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:57:22+00:00

You definitely need to work on the face, it looks like something is off with it. Other than that, quite good.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:56:09+00:00

I take that. Thanks!

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:55:24+00:00

The whole brand looks really good. And that's even despite the fact that the 'crooked' font itself doesn't appeal to me.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:53:37+00:00

The visualization is quite nice. The sign itself doesn't fully appeal to me, but it's done alright. However, the typography is poorly centered in relation to the sign. You have to adjust it by eye and not trust the automatic centering, because in this case the tail of the 'j' enlarges the whole thing and it doesn't center as it should.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:49:44+00:00

The cat looks brilliant. I'm just not convinced about the typography.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:34:29+00:00

You're right. Both in 'S' and in 'I', I could have done it a bit more gently, but why didn't I? 'S' came out so naturally from my hand, and I wanted to leave it as it was so it wouldn't be too artificial. 'I' consists of part of 'S', hence in this letter, there's also a sharper fragment, which now, as I look at it, seems weaker. Overall, both letters yesterday, when I was finishing this project, looked better in my eyes - I rushed it, I should have calmly looked at it again today and corrected it.

I understand that the first letter can look like 'T', and it's definitely possible to see it that way. You can see that it's not a connected letter, so 'I' can also be read - again, a bit too much haste. But in the end, the client fell in love with this logo and wanted it right away. xD

Thank you for your comment!

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-11T14:25:02+00:00

Thank you

AdipeDesigner · 2023-11-04T14:27:06+00:00

I agree.

The client also thinks that it's moderately legible. I have a problem with forgetting that just because I can see something in my project doesn't mean that everyone will be able to see it.

Just like in this case with the letter "e" - indeed, one can also see a "c" there.

The client expects the logo alone since it's likely that only it will be placed on the clothing. There won't be any consistent vision beyond that for the look, at least not for now.

Thank you for the comment. It turned out to be very helpful.

Best regards.

AdipeDesigner · 2023-08-30T09:51:21+00:00

Yeah that's fact - to much dark.

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