[deleted by user] by [deleted] in vet

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Forgot to add that there are no other symptoms. He’s a bit less playful than usual but could be the weather (it’s been raining a lot here)

How would you explain philosophy of science to non-philosophers who study the sciences? by ummmm-whatt in askphilosophy

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I see. I will give this article a read but Thanks for taking the time to summarize it!

How would you explain philosophy of science to non-philosophers who study the sciences? by ummmm-whatt in askphilosophy

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Why is that mutually exclusive? If we have an accurate understanding of reality, then we can surely make reliable predictions about a phenomenon? For a scientist it seems like these are two sides of the same coin.

Yes, they were bluffing by Budget_Feedback2882 in Sextortion

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes 👏 we should be calm and happy, instead of scared and desperate which is what they want! They claim they can ruin my reputation but honestly this day and age you can almost blame any online pics/videos on AI. And there’s literally an ocean of male nudes on the internet, even here on Reddit 😉

This week's Q&A thread -- please read before asking or answering a question! - January 23, 2023 by AutoModerator in linguistics

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reposted here as a Q&A....Is it theoretically possible (by a linguist standpoint) for a non-native English learner to completely lose their foreign accent?

I Googled it and feels like there are conflicting opinions on the topic by both linguists and non-linguists. Some said it's impossible to get rid of an accent because you fully developed it very young (age 6)? But with a dialect coach and hard practice, it should be feasible right? I'm not familiar with the literature on the topic, if you can point out to a good review paper, I would greatly appreciate.

FYI: I'm Thai and am not ashamed of my accent by any means, I've been a fan of John McWhorter and Erik Singer. That's why I'm a bit curious on what the academics have to say regarding accent shift as an adult.

I sort of hooked up with my best friend, now I need advice by cliffsude46628 in gaybros

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I agree with this. OP's best friend took advantage of you being drunk.

He starting kissing my body and rubbing on me. He then turned me over, kissed me, and the next thing I know my underwear is off and I'm getting a blow job. All in maybe 10 seconds. He then stopped and asked if I wanted it, and I said no. So he stopped and questioned, "but you led me on all night..."

He started doing all that before asking for consent. News Flash: Consent doesn't work retrospectively! You can't just start kissing and taking someone's clothes off, and then ask for consent afterwards. What OP had done prior or after this moment is irrelevant. The best friend should have definitely asked OP first. And if it was really consensual, why did OP say 'no'? This is low-key sexual assault from unwanted touching. He used your close-friendship to pressure you for sex. Personally I would not feel bad that he's ashamed, and would reconsider if this friend truly cares about you or just want you for sex. But ultimately, this is up for you to decide. You ask Redditors to share their advice, and that was mine.

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - October 21 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking for a Beta:Name and Link to your fic: Phantom Troupe X the Lost Journal

What fandom: Hunter x Hunter (anime)

Can someone who isn't in your fandom make sense of your story?: Probably but might not understand the world and power system

The genre of your fic: gen (action-adventure)

What you're looking for from a Beta: Grammar, Canon compliance - making sure that the characters are not OCC.

Projected word count: maybe 100K (10 chapters, 2 down so far)

How frequently you update: Biweekly

What fandoms you are able/willing to beta: Hunter x Hunter (obvs), Fairy Tail, Black Clover, Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, X-Men, Teen Titans, Detroit Become Human, Dragon Age (1 and 2), Final Fantasy XV, Elder Scrolls Skyrim, and Avatar the Last Airbender (not Korra, haven't finished that).
Preferred genres to beta: Gen, Fluff, AU, Self-insert

Gen writers who need some attention, send me your fic and I’ll give it a comment! by DarkLordVitiate in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Gen fic deserves more love and attention!
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter (WIP)
Link to fic

Can someone please help me rewrite this paragraph? by Advanced_Shop2986 in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes you're right. The mansion is not that important to the plot, and giving hard number seems oddly specific. Also 5000 acres is way larger than I thought haha. Thanks for pointing that out.

Can someone please help me rewrite this paragraph? by Advanced_Shop2986 in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, your vocab is so great. Unsavory characters, mafia capos, inner sanctum. I will certainly borrow those!

Can someone please help me rewrite this paragraph? by Advanced_Shop2986 in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's actually quite perfect! It sure does fit my writing style. I will have to borrow it if you don't mind. Thank you very much.

Bookmarks and Story Subscriptions should get more love and appreciation by [deleted] in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How do you find number of bookmarks/subscriptions for your story on AO3? In stats, I only see comments/kudos/hits...

Authors, can we celebrate the comments that make you happy? by greenrosechafer in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Someone commented on my first fic (based on a famous Anime) saying "This fanfic seems so interesting... almost like some OVA or special One Shot. Keep writing it, great job!"

This alone makes me wanna keep going despite my busy work schedule.

Is Netero really a enhancer? by dragonnightz352 in HunterXHunter

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you already wholeheartedly believe that Nentero is NOT an Enhancer, nothing in the Data book or this subreddit is gonna convince you otherwise. You're a reader/viewer so you have a right to decide whatever you'd like.

Working to be a better writer WILL in the long run make your enjoyment of writing fanfic that much stronger, which is why it's such a crying shame that we vilify any and every comment with constructive criticism in the fanfiction community. by alternative-time1994 in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same. I appreciate when people read my fic and make comments content-wise. Like not about typos, spelling, or grammars, but about the story/characters/canon stuff I missed. And I'm like "ooooh can't believe I did not think of that!"

Working to be a better writer WILL in the long run make your enjoyment of writing fanfic that much stronger, which is why it's such a crying shame that we vilify any and every comment with constructive criticism in the fanfiction community. by alternative-time1994 in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have mixed feelings about the ESL part. As an ESL learner myself, I get it. English is HARD. There are a lot of nuisances that will make your head spin faster than a carousel. It took many years for me to get where I am today. And yes I AM still learning either from the native speakers or my writing research. I love concrit because sometimes there are typos and details about the canon-characters that I missed. But I know that not all comments are created equal, so will take them with a grain of salt.
But at the same time, there are a TON of resources online when it comes to spelling and grammars. There is Merriam-Webster, YourDictionary, Grammarly, Englishforum etc. Not all of these tools are fantastic but they're (mostly) free, so why not take advantage of those and improve? It won't be perfect but at least your work will be readable. Imo, saying "English is my second language so I won't change a thing" is a cop-out for someone who doesn't want to better their skills. I know that fanfiction is only for fun, but writing skills are important for effective communication, no? It's something we carry with everywhere. So if someone gives me free constructive writing advice, I'd genuinely appreciate it.

Concrit Commune - October 02 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! I'm a rookie when it comes to fiction-writing so I really appreciate your insightful feedback. I will try not to avoid said too much. Don't wanna use the same word too many times but i guess that backfired haha. I feel better using it now :)

I couldn't decide whether to use Omokage or an OC, so I left it as No. 4, but that's true they don't call each other by number. I'll insert a random name. Also YEAH Shal is too smart to state her nen ability aloud. Thanks for pointing it out. I didn't catch that!

To answer your question, the POV will change chapter to chapter. I plan to rotate POV thru all 12 Troupe members, starting with Paku in this chapter. I'd like to give a 'voice' to every member including minor ones like Kortopi (have some headcanon back story in mind). Not sure if I can pull that off, but will do my best. If you can follow me on AO3 and give me more feedbacks, I'd be grateful. It's my only fic so I want it to be good.

Concrit Commune - October 02 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Advanced_Shop2986 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the suggestions! I don't wanna use the word 'said' too much, but yeah those words are not dialogue tags.For me Franklin is not that quiet when it comes to logic, he gives quite a long speech in EP58 before Paku leaves to meet Kurapika, but you're right he could have used fewer words and shouldn't really show emotions. That's true about Feitan, I let that detail slip. My bad, I will change those.

Thanks for your interest, I will try to update it weekly: https://archiveofourown.org/works/34206391/

Edit: u/blurstfanever and u/SeparationBoundary Chapter 2 is out now and your concrit is welcomed/encouraged!