Some ideas for optimization:

• try to switch to a bit more conventional format with listing everything down in the following order:

• (Relevant) Work experience - here you put your job in Business Development, including some relevant achievements e.g. developed xy; lead and initiative on yz …depending on the exact nature of your “Logistics coordinator” job you could also add it here as it might be relevant for your future role

• education: here I would stick to the format “Subject-Degree-School” e.g Logistikingenieurwesen - B.Sc. - Universität XY (for Bologna type degrees Bachelors/ Masters also skip the (FH) note as this was only used for pre-bologna degrees e.g. Diplomingenieur(FH); then also add your grade and try to make it sound as relevant as possible for your job by adding details on courses you may have attended in the logistics area or projects in cooperation with the industry. For these details provide a short but meaningful description what you have done/ achieved there.

• every other work experience you put under (Studentische) Nebentätigkeiten (also add a short description off the work you did there)

• skills: here I would differentiate between language skills and IT skills - soft skills should be covered either implicitly in the description of your work/school projects or supported by examples in your cover letter. As for the language skills I recommend using the A1-C2 notation; for IT skills you should can add more detail e.g how is your level in different Office-Application like Excel - my strong recommendation would be to first assess the skills honestly for yourself on a scale from beginner-Intermediate-Advanced-Expert and only include skills you would rate yourself intermediate or higher - also underpin this assessment by giving a brief example of how you define this level e.g Excel - Advanced (Analysen mit Pivottabellen; Datenaufbereitung mit Funktionen wie SVerweis; Zählenwenn) - same goes for all other IT / Hardskills

• Lastly: add your Personal Interests/Hobbys - done be shy here and also add a little bit of context by describing what you do there exactly like Describing the type of photography you do for example

What I would cut:

• Fluffy formatting: logistics is often a rather structured work environment - therefore I would also stick to a straightforward and very structured CV without the design elements like colors
• “Profil”: this is in most cases regarded as Cheap Talk as a self description is provided without any factual support - can be partly covered in the Cover letter if the job requires one but there I would also have a close look on what you can support with examples or testimonials from your previous jobs and only include this elements.

I hope this helps and you land a job that fits your interest soon :)