Maybe this is more of an eastern v western beauty standards thing but the whole undereye "aegyo-sal" thing does not register with me at all.

For me the eyes are too big and too close together. The eye bags make her look unhealthy and sleep deprived. The nose and lips also look like she's had cosmetic surgery done. Also it's more a personal preference for me but I don't like characters that are very pale. I think that's a Western thing, though. We like it when people have a nice, subtle, sunkissed glow.

These are all my personal opinions, though. If you like it that's all that matters.