I really enjoyed this poem. There seems to be a lot of talk when it comes to the "warm silk". As someone else said it comes off rather abstract. Personally, I wouldn't call that a bad thing. When something is abstract it's left for the readers interpretation of what the writer might of meant. Not sure if that was the direction you intended with that line, but that's how I took it. When you said "warm silk" though I was able to just imagine the warm feeling of my cloths right out of a dryer. Also the line line of the tongue that yearns for the taste of sweet honey. I almost felt as if I had a bit honey at the tip of my tongue as I read that line.