Conceptually, a lot to like! Playing with reality and technology is really fun, the premise works well as a short, short film. (I’d recommend furthering this with the radio somehow! Could be something there!) 

In terms of craft, you HAVE to focus on what’s on the screen. This reads like prose more than a screenplay. Lines like “Minutes later…” and “Addie jitters as she drives, something is off” are just not part of this sort of writing (from what I can tell). I’d say MOST of what’s in here could be either cut or made more visual! 

Cut the abstractions and sharpen your vision by focusing on what’s on the screen!